Hey, Awesome story so far. I really haven't found Dustin/Hunter stories to be so interesting until I read your Nature's Fury the first one, it was great. Now I really kind of like the pairing, cuz I kind of understand it more I guess, don't know really other than how great they are in your stories.

Gah! Open ending! I'm so reading the sequel tomorrow!
Anyway, nice story! I liked it. poor Tori though :( but since I'm a Hunter/Dustin fangirl, I'm glad they ended up together, hahaa :)

loved this chapter, had everything I like in stories, drama and so much sadness at the end. Love it

(sniffs) Poor Dustin. So this is how it ends, huh?

I had fun while I was reading it.

I am glad that things worked out with Dustin and Tori. And for Hunter to spill the beans on his mission after the made up...how very painful for Dustin.

At least I know how it ends in the second story.

I love the last chapter. As the reader you can't help but feel every little emotion you put into this story. You feel Dustin's and Hunter's anger, Tori's desperation and Cam's secret longing. You feel Dustin's heart-breakening sorrow in the end, but still can't help but be hopeful, even happy to know that everything will be fine in the end (uhh Spoiler to Lithium).

Hunter, oh why didn't you tell Dustin earlier? It makes everything so complicated... I can so feel Dustin's emotions (I wonder why? I still can't help but identify myself alot with him) in every moment of the story, even when a pissed 9-months pregnant, who just got her last Ben & Jerry's icecream taken away, slapped him (this line, why did you put it in there anyway? Kind of...different from your usual style. You usually compare to something that matches the persons' actual feelings, not something that makes it sound slightly ridiculous.)

Still, great chapter, great story, and in combination with Lithium...awesome. I would definitely recommend reading Lithium first, reading Honestly after it explains so many things that were uncertain before, but still didn't complicate understanding Lithium.

Thank you! :-)

I'm waiting... where is the fantastical end to this story? It has to be amazing, after all I've read so far...

Great story.

Whoa. Drunk Hunter... Funny at first... Can't wait for more.

Hey, an update. I've been wondering when you were gonna update yesterday...everything has been so slow lately...and to actually, get this now, you are a life saver.

Poor Dustin. Not exactly the best condition under the circumstances is it?

But I like how it turned up.

great chapter cant wait for more love the vid for it
so tori and hunger are no longer together right

I liked the way this chapter included the flashback from Lithium. And Hunter drunk in the bath tub was hilarious.

I think my favourite part of all these chapters is Dustin's insecurity because you've written it really well. I'm glad there's more to come. Looking forward to an update!

Damn! Everything is getting so complicated. (chuckles) Chaos will ensue...I can't wait for that to happen.

O drama. I was curious as to what Hunter would do if he found out about the baby but I like the way the story is going. I especially like the way you describe how Hunter feels about Tori and Dustin, and how the feelings are so similar and yet so different. The video you've made for this on YouTube is awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.

E! No! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NOO!! N-O! Do not do this!!

great chapter so she is pregnant and i was hoping she would tell hunter this just adds more drama