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DiamondDreams789FIFi 5/23/12 . chapter 33
Gosh, why did you have to end it like that?

Oh well, just hurry up with the sequel already.

I love your fanfiction, and I have to keep reading it!

Just Make sure Sasuke and Sakura end up together ok?
BloodyGirl 5/22/12 . chapter 33
Whaaaaaaa! Poor Sasuke-kun! :(

It was depressing, but actually a great story.
magicaltoothbrush 3/17/12 . chapter 10
that is disgusting.. she wiped her vomit with the back of her hand.. ._.
anon 3/11/12 . chapter 33
Please continue ur story.
anon 3/9/12 . chapter 17
Hey. i was just wondering why is naruto being such an asshole? i want the old narutp back. :( the one who was friends with sasuke and wouldnt hirt sasuke without a reason. the one who understood sasuke and knew he had a reason to do what he did. the only one who stood up for sasuke. sorri im just a bigg naruto fan.
uchihaaforever 3/7/12 . chapter 1
love your story!

but please...

give sasuke eyes! and love for sakura

shaaaanks3
melody-berry2 3/3/12 . chapter 33
Awww this made me cry...

And it be amazing if u made a sequel!

I would so read!
Alyssa Michele 2/28/12 . chapter 1
AHHHH! I was in tears by the end of this story! Love it though!(:
Toreh 2/23/12 . chapter 33
Honestly, you're a good writer, but I felt like I spent the entire time waiting for something positive to happen. I understand that this is a drama, but goddamn, it's like as soon as one thing returns to normal, someone gets kidnapped, when they retrieve that person someone else gets raped, then someone else gets an STD (I'm exaggerating). But really, I feel as though they could not catch a break. Sasuke comes off as a major asshole, aside from the parts where he cries, but I appreciate that you made his behavior believable. Sakura comes off as an abuse loving needy psycho. It's like they both get the short end of the stick to everything, especially Sakura. No sex for 15 years and he does some other chick? I almost felt as if I could feel her pain, and this final chapter just blew my mind, I can't say in a good way.. How much more can one couple lose? It's become down right depressing. I don't know, I guess I feel as though this probably wasn't my cup of tea; too all over the place for me.. Maybe I'm not an angst reader. What I did enjoy were the parts relaying the good times of Sasuke and Sakura's relationship. You built that up nicely. Don't get me wrong, you're obviously a talented writer if your getting such strong emotions out of readers.
personwhohasaccountbutnotinit 1/31/12 . chapter 23
totally understanding your anger at mockingjay. i loved the hunger games and catching fire though.
BananaphoneBob 1/26/12 . chapter 33
Umm ... okay ... WOW! It has taken me about three days to read this, but wow. So totally near tears at this moment in time! I was so hoping for a happy ending! This was such an amazing story, seriously, I am so envious of you! Hosaka! Sakura! Sasuke! Miki! Kaori! AHHHHH! I am so reading the sequel to this! I need it! You know when you find out something bad and your heart just sort of clenches? This is like one of those moments! AH! Just ... wow. Breathe, Emma ... breathe ... Well done!

I also have to say, I got so happy every time I recognised a song lyric :p I actually listened to The Script after If You See Kay, I love that song :D

By the way, in one of the very first chapters I think there was a Charlie the Unicorn reference? Niiiiice :D

-x-Emma-x-
mysterybeauty 1/21/12 . chapter 4
from the 5th senntence you made me laugh haha

your story is hilarious i love sasuke's humor
mysterybeauty 1/21/12 . chapter 2
you had me cracked up at sasuke's sarcasticness about naruto going without ramen!

aww and i love that scene very orginal :)
blue9989 1/21/12 . chapter 33
I'm not sure how I feel about this story. I loved the beginning but hated how it all ended. Why would Sakura let sasuke give up his eyes and then decide that she can't be with him. Sounds to me like sasuke just got used and tossed asside. It just doesn't make sense to me that she would have a change of heart all of a sudden when they had been connected for over 15years
Gravekittylitter22 12/31/11 . chapter 31
This is shit! I loved this story but they got so distant D: it drives me to tears it sucks!
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