I like your story!!
xD It's very well written and the characters are very well IC. Do you mind if I make a story like this instead with Donut and Caboose switched? I'm giving you all the credit of course!

NO WE cant go back and get it!! Itll have been destroyed! lol
great story mate

This has turned out to be a good RvB fanfic, keep it up. 'your on your way to a medal simmons'. :D.

This is the funniest thing I think I have ever read... I didn't know there was a section for Red vs Blue... Well, I guess under Halo it would work... I watched that show once with my ex and am now hooked. You really got their personalities right - Caboose is my favorite, definately. Gotta wait for tomorrow to read the rest, though.

@-^-- Hollie

TGhat was good.

Please write a new stroy soon. based on RVB.

I liked the way you used carictors from the story to begin.:)also i think that you might want to make it cealer when O'Malley is talking and when doc is talking.:)

Nice! I wonder why Tex knows that.he he he.jk. i wonder who shellah was firing at.

I agree Tex does rock!! Funny reponse from tex.

That cliff hanger was good. I think I know whose voice that was... Well keep up the good work!

Well that was anti climatic.

That was pretty good. I'm in

DOn't tell me shelia is evil now.

Ooh I bet it's Captain Flowers! No wait-

Good start

RM: I bet it was Tex and she believes Caboose is the one possessed with O' Malley. Or maybe it's Wyoming since he's in cahoots with Omega.
Arty and Andy: Who knows. It might be a new character. Update soon.