This would have been so much better if you had had Snape anaylse the dream a bit more and maybe from a later point of view..? Although the dream was very good as was Snape's reaction to it. And Harry's anger at the end? can't blame him :)

HI. this was really quite good.

maria

Interesting and surreal story. Thank you!

I like it

That was very interesting. You almost implied that Severus can predict the future, if only in dreams... Hmph. Maybe he should take Trelawny's job. Nice one-shot.

-Audrey

Very good! Its got the right amount of mystery and confusion, and a great close!
Is there any chance that you'll continue with this?
Song

This was very good, can't wait to read more. Ugh I love your stuff. XD

Poor Harry, not even knowing what he did wrong. Severus should pay attention to his dreams. Good story.

I would love to see what you write next.




Thank you,



Terri

Sad isn't it?

To ignore a warning like that, to prevent what could've been.

I liked it though.

Excellent beginning. Please update soon.

thats wierd

Very convincing.

I LOVE THAT HARRY SAYS THAT SEVERUS WILL HURT DUMBLEDORE. IF I HAD A DREAM LIKE THAT, I WOULD FREAK OUT! GOOD ONE SHOT!


Ja Ne ~FOXANBU~

Hope your going some where with this...

Its a good start to a Snape mentor Harry Fic.