This was so short, but I found myself reading it slowly, taking in all your descriptions and being sure not to miss anything. Your Axel is perfect.

Oh, holy shit. This was awesome. I'm not even sure exactly what to say, because I'm sure it's been said over and over, but this was just mind blowingly amazing and I literally got goosebumps reading it. Your Axel and your Riku and just ... everything. Everything was amazing. I have a feeling this is one of those stories that will stay with me for quite a while.

Okay, here's what I love about your short fics. Really good long fics are like eating an awesome meal, with sauce, spices, things to melt on your tongue and things to sink your teeth into. Really good short fics, for me, generally feel like eating one of those pastries you find in Parisian confectionary windows. The ones with tiny slices of strawberry and mint and artistically arranged dots of cream. Delicious, but not satisfying in the way a big meal is.

The thing about your short fics is...they feel like eating a four-course dinner INSIDE a one-mouthful pastry. It's so small, but there's so much substance, so much to bite and savour.

And that metaphor just broke the red light and kept on going. Summary: omgsque!

“Heavy little fucker.”

Wow, Axel, I wonder just how you'd know that. Oh, this is also one of my favourite renditions of Axel ever. Possessive, manipulative and WITH SMOKE COMING OUT OF HIS ROBE. That little detail made me happy.

...Yeah.

I think somewhere through that whole thing all those lovely, lovely descriptions killed me.

I ish dead.

But Gods... Mur. >_< The whole atmosphere in this story was so tense and dark and... God! It gave me shivers.

But I love it. Omg.

-sighs- Great job. I can't wait to see more writing coming from you. :D


*bliss*

I loved every single bit of this. The description was just shiver-worthy. Have some hearts. ♥

as USUAL;
it was spectacular.
but what else comes from you? :D

Well damn! That was just a tad freaky! Not really sure what happened to Roxas's body...Is it just laying there and they have sex? Cause that makes it even freakier...But pretty damn awesome! Have I mentioned your probably the only one who can get me to really just like Axel/Riku! I think I have...But I say it again!

Bizarre, but nice all the same.

I must say that I think that the most powerful line in the whole fic is the one you use for the summary, but instead of detracting from the power of the fic I think it adds even more. ♥ this was lovely, from the description (/Cattish green eyes tore past the pigment and Heartless glamour/)(sticky, clam-flesh gums) to the dialogue and-and just all of it. ♥ Lovely work as usual~

That was so... creepy, dark, BiZ-like, and I /loved it/ as such.

This: "It settled and spilt, pooling the rotten feet of some javelin-boned creature onto the cement. From afar, he could have easily been mistaken as beautiful—hair a pure mimicry of fire; lithe and pale cheeks—but as close as he was, Rikunhort saw the piss-yellow teeth; the pockmark burns; the dime-store makeup he wore." Javelin-boned, the burns, and not making Axel completely beautiful like stories tend to do (including my own!)

Your style is such a pleasure. ♥ I have a hard time wrapping my head around it sometimes, but that just drives me to read more and read it again. AND THAT LAST LINE. ohmyohmy. ♥

Also, Rikunort having a hard time dragging Roxas away. HAHA. That's awesome. "Heavy little fucker, ain't 'e?"

love you much. ♥

Le squee!

You know, seriously, I think I've fallen in love with your writing all over again. I love love love all the similes and metaphors and all that squeetastic stuff you use, and the Axel-Riku exchange is just too fantastic for words. They're so "grr-on-the-other-side" complex thing going, and it rocks my socks.

And this, this, this, best thing ever:

"Axel knew all too well of every wet Riku cell in his black Xehanort blood, every atom and nuclei and bitter blue bile whose birth was made from Riku."

Just...zomg. Instawin. Pretty much.

Hope this helps with that confidence shot! You of all people shouldn't have that problem, seriously. You rock quite hard. Yay you! ♥