I had to read the last few chapters all in one go to keep the pace going, it was really exciting.
I did get a bit lost at one point, wondering how they had rooms inside a van and how they got from underground to New Jersey, but maybe that was because I was reading it too fast.
I've really enjoyed reading this, your plot was pacy and interesting. You revealed enough to make me intrigued but not too much to spoil the tension.
Your Heather/Cooper moments were just too cute and that's all I can say without squealing.
A really addicting and enjoyable read, thank you.

Heather is bang on in character here, trying to do things even though she knows her life is in danger.

The bit with the line and the eraser was so cute.
For some reason I feel like Jordan telling her Cooper loves her makes it more real than anyone else telling her. It was a very reassuring scene.

I forgot to mention for chapter nine: Oh was the Cal you mentioned a reference to Cal Langdon? Or was he in the book and I'm just forgetting?
Ch13: The bit with Mrs Cartwright was nice and it felt right. There felt a sense of closure so that Heather could move on from that part of her life and feel safe now.

Haha, the bit with Jordan was just fantastic!

Oooooohh super cute! I am never this sappy but this chapter has me squealing like a teenage girl!

Oh gosh, it's so sweet that they're both getting what they want out of this.

Arghh everyone can see that Cooper likes her but her! Well she hopes but it's not the same. An interesting twist with the stalker. I'm glad it's Heather who worked it out and not Cooper, it seems like something that would happen in the books.

The letter almost sounded like Tad the first time I read it and I wonder if Cooper thought the same.

Ahh this chapter was so perfect, you've got the characterisation just right! Again, her conversation with Cooper was wonderfully heart stopping, everything that Heather said she felt.

The conversation between Cooper and Heather was really great. I liked the way you used Lucy to let Heather voice the feelings she had for Cooper, that was nice.
I feel that you've captured Heather/Meg's narrative style reallt well, especially with all the references and I look forward to reading more.

This story was AMAZING! Thank you so much for writing it!

LOVEEEEE this fan fic! You get Meg's style beautifully! A lot of your lines were ingenious! Great work:)! I'm writing one of my own.. could any of you check it out? Thanks! s/8066549/1/Third_Times_A_Charm_A_Heather_Wells_My stery

This story is freaking amazing! I know I'm late but I looked forward to reading this and I often forgot this was a fanfiction and not a branch off my Meg herself. Well done!

Such a good story. thought i was ready a real heather wells book. You definitely do another maybe one with an m rating.