hey kirsten
I found this one through "seeking a particular fic"from YTDAW
would you please find a way to finish this one it is very good ( like all your stories ) I would like to know the end and with me I think a lot of fanfic readers
thanks Linda

Interesting premise. I foundt this story tonight and was disappointed to suddenly hit the last chapter followed by tbc.
Stories like this are easy to get sucked into so I hope that your muse will wisper the next few chapters in your ear.

This is certainly different, but I like it! Reminds me of 1984 by George Orwell.

I like it. Threw me a bit at first...but I think I'm getting the hang of it.

wow this is just so interesting! i love it

I'm still liking this story. Can't wait for more. :D:D:D Keep up the good work. :)

I don't do this often but I'm going to beg you not to leave it too long before you update this.

I have to say it is probably the most original idea I have seen on here yet and I still haven't worked out quite what is going on but I think I have an inclin. I've been wrong before though... too many times to mention.

Anyway, beautifully written and the way your characters interact is always so believable, so real.

Update sooner.

I really, really love this! It's so much fun to read an alternate reality like this. And you've done such a great job making it compelling to read. I'm so invested now!

Thanks for the update!

She got saved!

What strange twisted dreams Sara is having. But it's and interesting story and I can't wait to see how it wraps up. More please, anne

Glad to see you back and writing more of this story. This is such an interesting and mysterious story and I'm really enjoying it.

I have to admit, I was skeptical at first. The idea is original, no question, but I was afraid it might have been too original for me. You've converted me though and I'm HOOKED! You've crafted a well composed, thought provoking, compelling story and I can't wait for the next chapters!

I love this story. I'm glad it's been updated. Looking forward to more. Keep up the great work.

This is so unusual, but good! Glad you decided to update.

Yay. I'm so glad you updated.