huwaah... though not that elaborate between natsuki and shizuru's conversation at the cliff i was totally feeling the angst of the author, talk about living your life huwahh! *tissue pls*

(oi glowie-san, is that all there is to their conversation? its not enough i guess? i'm ready to throw you an american size tomato! muwahahaha! *evil laugh*)

anyohw, thanks for translating! that was great...! i have to listen to Diva's song (blood+) to clear my head with this fic.
la la la la...!

The ending about life was really touching to me, especially since I've thought of suicide a few times.
It was a bit confusing to me with all those breaks lol but anyway, you have really good translating skills. Everything seems to fit in :)

Amazing really, i seriously almost had a tear at one point in the story

Hmm...all things do indeed need balance. =] Good start!

This is a great fic. Hats off to the original author (I wish my Chinese wasn't so poor so that I could read the original), & I doff my cap to you too for this very good translation attempt.
Kudos & thanks for the very cool read! Cheers! ^_^

In fact, glowie didnt send me the link, so I spend more than 10 mins to find this out. ( just after I found out he spamed my e-mail box XD)
I guess as an author, I should come here and read comments.So here I come. :)

Im really glad you guys enjoy it. :)
and glowie translates it beautifully. Its really beyond my expectation ( cuz I think sometimes translating is more difficult than writing ). =>As all you can see, English is not my subject lol
Really nice done!
glowie. (thats means you can spend more time on your homework now lol jk)

btw, if you can read Chinese, and wish to read more of my works, you can check my blog too.
or ask glowie to link you the Chinese forum.(which might make you sick lol)
Peace!

I don't think I could be any happier. This story is wonderful and I would have never known if you hadn't translated it. Thank you much glowie. ^_~

I liked this fic. cause it had a happy ending! ^^
Translating is such a pain but you did a great work! Congrats!
BTW, I found this topic in a forum that has some images and I assume it's a NatsuShizu Mai Otome fic. or something. here's the link:


I think the images spoil most of the story but also illustrate it quite good. ^^
Keep up the good work! :3

Once again, thank you for your translation which enabled us to discover this enjoyable story.

hmm it's finished. oh well, could you translate more fics? I heard Chinese fics are more well written than the Western ones.

^_^ we! nice nice ending.. I so love the idea of SHizuru doing so well with charity and all.. And yes, please send Firerei my deepest thanks for writing this wonderful work..

ANd KUDOS to you, glowie, for being such a hardworking translator that you are..LMAO!

Thanks for sharing this!! ^_^

Now~ you have got write 'your' story next time.. I'll be tagging you, and... YOU'RE It! -grins.evilly-

yay! a nice happy ending =)

by the way, another His Dark Materials reader? *huge smile* most people i know hasn't even heard of it :S

Such a beautiful ending...Firerei-sama...u're one of the best...Thank u so so much for translating this masterpiece for us, glowie-sama...Arigatto gozaimasu!

thank you very much for translating this and sharing with us.

that was so good... shizuru being cold and indifferent to natsuki was heartwrenching but im glad it had a happy ending.
*compliments flying firerei's way*

thanks so much for translating this! :)