Great so far , I love how you slowly build and add to the characters personalitys!

OWNED! I was so right! I don't think Reala is gunna be to happy about this.

Well I guess she's gunna see NiGHTS now huh??

hmph. Nice. I like her.

Hm...I'll keep reading.

I love You story!

wow continue please?

That Jackle. Always so cunning. Always tricking people. Oh well, he can't help it. Great chapter BTW.

Oh dear...

I'm sorry, m'mam, but you seem to have bred a Mary-Sue.

Jackle is very OOC. He's a cunning Nightmaren, NOT SCOOBY DOO.

You've overpowered her, I see few weaknesses and many strengths.

The summary screams the whole "boo hoo everyone hates me 'cuz I'm specialer than them" cliche, and it doesn't leave a pleasant taste in my mouth to say the least.

But, at least your grammar and spelling are good. For that, I'm playing nice and saying not to kill with fire, but make major revisions and try again.

YAY NEXT CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON!

This id getting good! ...That dirty rotten Jackle!

Wow! Youko is like Kirby in some ways. She may be cute but when mess with her, you'll be wishing you didn't. Great secound chapter!

That will teach Jackle not mess with Youko! Cool ch.! Can't wait for the next one!

Nice story. Youko is an intersting charater.

That was great!