Will you continue this please it is adorable and I want to read more pwease

Adorable story!
It was one of those 'gahhdamnit its so cliche but there's a smile on my face cuz its so damn cute' stories.
I'm happy i read it.

hahahaha! LOVED HOW IT ENDED!

That was good you should keep this going and write another chapter. Please do it.

Oh come on! This about the fifth book I've read TONIGHT that leads up to Gaara and Naruto only kissing! Please either update or make a sequel!

hehehehehe please make a m rated sequel to this story itd be great!

xD THE END! xD AND I. MUST. HAVE. MORE! ...Please...

: 3333 Amazing. Write more more more

This was one of the best Naruto crack fanfiction I've ever read. Not that I found a lot of good ones, but... A little advice, don't use "very". Use a synonym of its, it's gonna be more expressive.

I especially like the last part, "...until one unfortunate teacher called Iruka looked out the window to see what had caught the class' attention and got the shock of his life." It's funny and you've had a good use of the words.

Okay, enough with the poetic stuff from me.

I 3 THIS STORY.

What a shame on me, I discovered this just now haha

Awesome story!

AHA! I found you!

I read this story ages ago, by following a link from somewhere but I didn't have an account back then to leave a review.

I absolutely LOVE how IN CHARACTER this is, while still being adorable - I love the interactions between the sandy sibs, and I love how easy it is to picture EVERYTHING you describe, especially Gaara's (understandably) flawed logic -

Massive five stars from me, I'm SO glad I finally found this story again so I can leave my review, add it to my favourites and hopefully do it justice. because it's a masterpiece and you should be so proud of it -

I love this story. Good job.

awww that was soooo sweet but there are a few places where the wrong word is there but other then that i loved it

Really good job on this and... ha-ha, poor Iruka XD.

i love how their both romanticly retaredQ XD!