max winked? people do not wink! it is not normal! it looks like their eye is having a muscle spasm! it aint right! hehehe...the story is cool though

hey your story seems pretty cool. im intriqued, please continue. you really have max's voice down well. keep it up :)

funky story! good start! i am looking forward to how it sounds very much like a real epsiode!

cool write more please

good start

Dun dun dun! Nice cliffhanger, not to much, not to little. More please. -LadyCallie

good. i cant wait to read the next chapter.

this is great! i can just feel the excitement in the air. write more soon! lata )

that was good. i cant wait to read the rest.

Good start. Keep up with it

i like it so far write more