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miyukikoukotsu
2008-07-11
ch 5,
abuseSo basically, I'm in love with you. Not only have you kept them in great character, (Serge is pretty flexible considering you can shape him in the game, I think you've captured what the "real" Serge would be like nicely) you've made an interesting plot!

Just saying, Riddel, Kid, Serge, and Norris are probably my four favorite characters, so it's REALLY weird you picked those two to use in particular...but it's awesome! I love it, I think you've captured everyone's personalities perfectly...although I feel a bit bad for Norris since this IS a Kirge fic, and that means it won't end well for him.

...He can always come ask me to marry him if he wants, haha!

Please update soon. If you have the chapters written as you've said, it's so mean to make people wait! Please? I've added you to my alert list, so I'm totally keeping up on this!
Sovereign of Skies
2008-07-08
ch 5,
abuse!

Oh... That makes sense that Julia is Kid... God, this story is awesome!! Please write more soon! ^_^
Sovereign of Skies
2008-07-08
ch 3,
abuse*Sighs*

Im in love with your story!! Again, you are truly amazing!!

Its nice to read a fan-fic where Serge isnt a total wuss and actually stands up for himself =P
Sovereign of Skies
2008-07-08
ch 2,
abuseOkay... I'M HOOKED!!

I love your story so much so far!! I haven't read a good Chrono Cross fan-fic in a long time... YOU ARE AWESOME!! ^_^
Bazle
2008-05-24
ch 5,
abuseThis one seems a little rushed... I still like it, but be careful.
Bazle
2008-05-24
ch 4,
abuseAh ha ha ha, this is great.
I have nothing negative to say about this.
Bazle
2008-05-24
ch 3,
abuseChrono Cross has long been one of my favorite games of all time, and it's so refreshing to read a good story about the enigmatic and quirky, but undoubtedly genuine love shared by Serge and Kid.

However, even as love can make us do crazy things, avoid Serge getting too angry in the future. Anger and frustration is fine, but Surge is THE silent protagonist. I'm not saying you did it wrong, but it will be very easy to do so.

You pulled Leena off perfectly. And you did Kid better than you think.
dreamer789
2008-03-16
ch 5,
abuseI SHALL REVIEW! God, I love your fic so much, that I can't stop reading! GAAH! Why did you make it so damn good!?
Hannah
2008-01-28
ch 5, anon.
abusehey! i have been playing chrono cross nearly nonstop for about a week now (i just got it back after several years) and i got curious about fanfics. i hav found your and i must tell you i think it is amazing! i love it! all the other sited and stories i have found have been pretty boring and didnt hold my attention for very long at all. i hope you write more soon! im excited for the next chapter!

hannah
Cloud911
2008-01-17
ch 5,
abuseThe chapter get better every time! Way to go with suspense! DUMP NORRIS! wo update soon or else!
Alice Stowell
2008-01-09
ch 5,
abuseOh my! it keeps geting better and beter
I really need them to be together, I need more chapters please update when you can *w*
Peach the Hedgehog
2008-01-07
ch 5,
abuseActually, I rather liked it. It made sense to me.

I feel sorry for Serge and for Kid, and I hope that they can find a way through.

I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!
Reaper's Shadow
2008-01-06
ch 5,
abuseVery good chapter. Update soon!
Alice Stowell
2008-01-03
ch 4,
abuseOMG, today I just felt the need of a chrono cross fic, and yours is amazing, please update soon!
I can't believe Kid is going to marry Norris, please no, Serge you have to appear now o.รณ
Sylvr
2007-11-29
ch 4, anon.
abuseUPDATE SON! o this is such a cute pairing butt i want surge to come to kid...omg how will he react to all this :S cant wait to find out!
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