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Reviews for: I'm Gonna Make You My One And Only Baby
holospartoi258
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
hey there.

I'm not very sure what was going on in this story...i know that it is lemon, but...the details were a little complicated.

anyway, i'll take it, the only DannyXPaulina lemon EVER. And the only dxp fanfic. Sigh...

Btw, please tell me if you are a DannyXPaulina fan. Like me. There aren't many out there and it would be comforting to know if there are any .

This may sound very offensive to some... but DannyXPaulina 4eva! ^_^
me
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
WHAT THE FUCK HAPINED?
cRaZyMaN676
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
hm, gotta say, that wasn't exactly Romance/Drama as much as it was Romance/Humor or Romance/Irony, ya? oh, well. i still hate Paulina, but now it's with the passions of a thousand freakin suns. the hate, i mean.
Ndasuunye
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
Wow Paulina is such a f* b*. That was so cold but it made sense nonetheless. Good job and how funny was that webcam. Hah
Martel
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
I've liked all your stories so far, but I hadn't reviewed simply because I couldn't think of anything to say. I liked this one in particular because of all the messy love/lust triangle/rectangles you kept giving us peeks of.

Also, I liked your portrayal of Paulina. She was acting more like a person with thoughts and feelings than the popular girl character we keep seeing in the cartoon.

(And, hey, if the show kept shoving Sam/Danny everywhere, you feel free to go and shove Val/Danny everywhere in your fics if you wish. I know I don't mind)
Bloody Hell
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
Hell, I liked it. Beats all the bubbly, happy, lovey-dovey crap out there. Still, I suggest proofreading it a little more, there where a few grammatical errors.
brightlily
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
im confused.
two dannys?
huh?
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