Aww! I love it! I love it! I read this ages ago and went hunting for it again today! Good work!

Wow, this was a pretty good story. Your writing style was also well done _. Sadly, I also view Maria to be somewhat of a ditz (especially after her first appearance in "Rondo of Blood" :P), and thought that this portrayed her naiivette rather well. Good job _.

By the way, if you ever have the time, feel free to read and review "my" Castlevania fic titled "Castlevania: Sonnet of Legends."

Until then, I'll see what other works you have that might be an interesting read. Bye for now _.

Good story. I am a big fan of Castlevania. Keep up the good work.

OKay, that just plain rocked! anywho, make another one pleez!

I thought it was pretty good! But it was a little bloody at the end. I liked the fact that it gave a lot of details, not many stories do. Oh! This review is for the whole story, not just chapter six. :)

Oh my goodness! I haven't reviewed this yet! Eep! Ok, I'm reviewing now. ... ... Um... ... This is hard to do with my brother staring me down, but I luv it sooo! I don't even like Castlevania and I luv it! Yaaay!

pretty damned sweet so far...

naitachal-

Interesting story, I must say. I usually don't like it when people alter the plot, but this was a given and it was an enjoyable story. Keep up the good work! )

This was one of the best stories you've ever written! You continue to improve your writing skills with every story and I know that one day you'll become a famous author. And I can brag to everyone that I knew you when. We better still be friends when you become famous or else I might have to become famous too and kick your famous butt! :) But anyways, I only get to brag to everyone that I was there when you wrote this fic. MWAHAHAHAHA! I was one of the first people ever to see it! Before it was on ! HAHA, everyone! I am better than you! Uh, not really. Humor me... Anyways Samalander, you rock! Thank you for helping me with my fic, Eternal Confessions, and for getting into Castlevania in the first place.

Love always,

Dana (Frozen Shade)

Cool story. Good start, but kinda weak ending...

Cool!

Well, I must stand and ''applaud'' the creative endeavor my 'lady'. It was at times enought to make my stomach queezy, but by the sounds of it, that was what you were going for. You are very talented, and you must keep up the 'writing.' I look forward to the next opportunity of ''chatting with you'', as I always enjoy our visits! May the Light of Love be with you and yours!

Love always...mrs Shad

Well I wish I could say I enjoyed the blood and gore, but I don't. It makes me feel cold, and brings no eager anticipation of wanting more...but that's me. Just being honest. Not finding fault with your writing, but I find if I allow my mind and heart to be drawn into those kinds of ''thoughts'', I have a tendency to feel my ''spirit'' become drained of the joy and uplift that I seek to cultivate in my daily life. You see...when I was younger, I too enjoyed those kind of images and stories...until in my twenties I found myself becoming sucked into a very depressing ''black hole'' that was the most awful experience of my life. I barely escaped that darkness..in my own spirit..and I cannot allow myself to ''play'' in that type of fantacy..because I know how ''real and oppressing'' the power of darkness can become in a persons life. I work hard every day to focus on the Light, hope and Love of each moment, because I have lost too many friends and loved ones to the realm of darkness. Maybe that comes with age and experience, as only Life has such capacity to teach in 'real and tragic ways.' That is as honest as I can be my friend, but is not meant as a negative on the way you write. I just do not ''like'' what it does to my spirit within. Love ya"

I really like the wolf character. It reminds me of the wolves I saw in Alaska. There were times I stood alone in minus 40 degree weather about 50 miles north of Fairbanks, Alaska watching the rainbow colors of the Northern Lights dancing across the dark blue-black velvet sky... ... "to the wolves howling in the frozen fronteer land." An eery melody, but somehow comforting as you don't feel so 'all alone' in the frozen landscape. I like the ''mystery'' of what ''hidden wisdom'' the wolf might reveal...because truly...a wolf is highly intelligent, a close family bond exists in the wolf clan...and I Have Native American Friends who have ''danced the wolf dance'' for Shad and I. Anyway, your suspense is intrigueing and I look forward to the next chapter...Love ya'

Awesome! This is a fantastic story, I can't believe more people didn't review it, I love it! Amazing plot continuity, great fight scenes, and chapter six was somewhat amusing, considering two of the people were nude for the whole time. Oh well. I probably wouldn't have seen that if you hadn't mentioned it to me, though. Don't let low reviews discourage you, you're a great writer! Ja ne!