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| defender 2007-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe 'sweets' get kinda old really fast but besides that its ok for a 1 shot... |
| SILVERArrowGRIFFIN 2007-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseDude,your story rocks so much!! can u make a sequel or sumthin'? |
| ELIZABETHheartsWILL 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abusethis is a cute story! very good! you dont usually see harry and hermione as a couple- |
| AidanHalfelven 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely cliché. I'm most definitely not a fan of Harry/Hermione and the characters are incredibly OOC. It wasn't that bad, grammar and spelling wise... it was the plot. Of course being the avid Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny shipper that I am, I'm a little repulsed by the fact that anyone would write anything different. Anyway, I don't know what else to say... so, good day to you. |