ok its almost 1 a.m. and em with out any sugar anywaya thats good keep it up

*sniff* Jessie and James...died? Poor Team Rocket! What's gonna happen next? Will they all find each other? *Maura*

that's really good, please continue. chapter 5 was about brock, right?

Wow... I wonder what will happen... What about Brock and Misty?

hurry up hurry up hurrry up!

I'll just have to wait until you get back from your vacation for chapter four. *Looks impatiently at watch*

I hope Ash isn't seriously injured, although for Misty's birthday, Brock could wrap Ash's head in a bright red bow! _

Since I'm limited on time on Internet, this review is to serve for all three chapters. I think you're doing a very good job with the story. The characterizations are good, and you're keeping us in suspense and your writing is very good. Please continue! I want to know what is going to happen next! Is Ash ok? Where are Brock and Misty? Please have the next part up soon!

ARGH! It's a...(wait for it)...cliffhanger ending? *dodges objects thrown at her by people unamused by her sense of humor* You must continue this story!

why is everyone having these damn cliffhangers! WHY! ...umm...hehehehe sorry bout that...continue pwease!

YAY! hey that was too short! more please!

*thinks* hope the next ones longer, but I shouldn't say anything I hate my writing skills, noinspiration when I need it! and when I get it its only a *part* of a story, forcing me to create the rest -.- *looks around, realizing she was babbling to peeps who don care* ok great story...plz continue! *trots off*

Well, Misty is acting all funky or something. Poor Ash and Brock! Please continue!

Cool story so far. I will be waiting for the next chapter

wow, good story, i really like it, and hope you write more. Adios

cant wait to see what'll become of this _