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| iknowyour 2007-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story. Kinda sad though. |
| wyldcat 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseVery well written! Could've been part of the ep :D I like the points you made about Smith being a part of the Doctor - you know, that bit just before you switch to Joan's POV. Anyway. :D Good work! |
| Cute Gallifreyan 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseNice peice...makes sense that the Doctor would be in pain after it was painfull that particular change he went through. Poor Joan. I think I feel sorry for her even more. After watching and rewatching the episode. I added your story to my C2 and... thanks for the kind remarks on my story. I think FF is being glitchy because I tried to update earlier and the browser window glitched out on me. gr. It has to be said FF can be hell, when it wants to be. |
| Stefan the Vampire 2007-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah, that gap needed filling. Its Wonderful, great characterisation, really sounds like the Doctor: "'Ow,' he said, giving himself a little shake, 'Rewriting your entire biology twice in as many months really isn’t a good idea. ‘Course it isn’t recommended to try even once… but twice? – leaves you feeling tingly… and a little confused… where am I?'" and I'm glad you added what Timothy said because that describes the Doctor really well. Well done. |
| templremus1990 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI have to say that I rather approached with the mentality of 'it's yet *another* post-Family of Blood fic'. However, you certainly dispelled all such doubts for me! Beautifully written and moving. Loved the bit about the Doctor/John Smith's eyes. |
| mrsreynolds 2007-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI absolutely love this! It's so beautifully written. Didn't David Tennant break your heart in this eppie? I couldn't help feeling there was a hole left by this missing scene and you've done a perfect job of filling it. I'm kind of glad it wasn't there in the episode because I would have ended up crying my eyes out in front of my family! Good luck with the exams! :) |
| Arwyn T 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written! It really feels like the scene we were never shown! Thank you!! |