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| -Halceeon- 2008-07-01 ch 56,  | abuseGreat Update :) I came close to tears with the funeral. Update soon! |
| sej1986 2008-06-28 ch 54, | abuseOK, so I meant to write BIL and it came out as BIL. Hm. You knew what I meant though, right? ;) |
| sej1986 2008-06-28 ch 55, | abuseI'VE READ IT!! I HAVE ACTUALLY READ IT! *does a little dance* So many things to say! Where to start? CHLACK!! Tava!! Curtis/Michelle! (does that have a name yet? Curtelle, perhaps? Says the girl who invented Maudrey...) HELLER! and... BIL! That is all. :D |
| haha21 2008-06-21 ch 55, | abuseGASP! JACK'S BROTHER?!?!! Bah... Should have known. |
| haha21 2008-06-17 ch 54, | abuseBAH! Murphy's Law: whatever can go wrong will go wrong. Of course. Hahahaha. Well, I apologize for not reviewing earlier. I have been busy with exams and such. They all should die. Need Jack or Ava to get the rocket launcher and blow up all the homework, tests, and anything else school related. If only. Well, at least school is finally over! WHO!! =D Well, I'll stop ranting now and awesome story. There is a lot of action and things that go wrong... like the show. Hahahaha. You probably have a lot of fun thinking up things that could go wrong. Hahahaha. I know I would. xD Well, I hope you update again soon! =] |
| Pinkjimmychoos 2008-06-17 ch 54, | abuseWoo, sorry I haven't reviewed in ages- just caught up with this, and its so good! Definately my fave line of the past couple of chapters: "Woohoo!" Ava exclaimed. "That was fucking awesome! I so want one of these!" and: "You know, one of these days you'll have a plan that goes from beginning to end without skipping any of the parts in the middle." HAHAHAHAHAHA! Nice. |
| Maverick500 2008-06-11 ch 54, | abuseGreat chapter, I was kinda hopin that you wouldn't have Jack blsmed |
| -Halceeon- 2008-06-11 ch 54, | abuseAHAH! that was great! Keep them updates coming :) |
| Maverick500 2008-06-09 ch 53, | abuseGreat chapter. Is Jack gonna gey with Chloe |
| -Halceeon- 2008-06-05 ch 53, | abuseOHH MY GOD FINALLY! *squeals* Thanks for the update:) |
| haha21 2008-05-24 ch 51, | abuseOh Shizz! If the speaker explodes and decapitates Tony, I will have to hunt you down. And that kick has got to hurt. I like Ava's bluntness with Jack. It was a bit harsh, but I appreciate how she got straight to the point. And Why did you have to leave off there? I think that the writers of fanfiction are having a bit too much fun with the cliffhangers. >. |
| sej1986 2008-05-24 ch 51, | abuseI love several things about this chapter. 1- Tony 2- Tony 3- Ava and Audrey's little exchange of words, and Michelle's "she'll snap you in half" :D Mwah ha ha 4- Bill 5- Tony 6- Curtis and last but not least 7- Heller!! Yes, I do love him. You'll never make me hate him :D |
| sej1986 2008-05-18 ch 50, | abuseYou do this every time- leave us hanging! And yet still I am surprised when it happens! Favourite things about this chapter- BILL! Tony and Jack banter Curtis/Michelle. Yes. I admit. You've got me sort of hooked. |
| Tigerlily Brown 2008-05-15 ch 50, | abuseYay! Make Paul the bad guy. I never liked him. (Not that I liked Audrey either.) Awesome chapter! |
| -Halceeon- 2008-05-15 ch 50, | abuseWow! Chapter 50! I'd sing Happy Birthday, but I don't think that would fit. Argg, the cliffhangers! Good chapter, update soon :) |