Lovely LarxNam...
=3

I bet Larxene is a storm in bed.

"Back to finish the storm", eh? ;O I'll read that.

Yum >:D

You have a mistake at the beginning, though. It says "in face" when it should say "in fact"

Either way.

WOOT WOOT.

OMG I LOVED THIS STORY. It is written exceptionaly well relating larxene to a storm and i cant help but love a well written yuri!

i like how you compared Larxene to lightning that is so true!! ^^ me likey!! :D

Oh. My. GOD! That was amazingly, desterbingly, BREATHTAKINGLY, brillient. 4&1/2 stars outof 5. Why? Larxene wasnt vishious enough.

That's Sexy..lol XD

it's sad that femmeslash gets so much less recognition than maleslash :P

i thought it was brilliant. great metaphor, very appropriate, and gorgeously sexy. :D

caught massive bonar. My gf appreciates. Thank you. [goes to get laid]

Good story. More Larmine lemons! [punches wall]

[NOW, goes to get laid]

very sensual. Well done :D

Nice! XD

pretty short, but other than that, GREAT! I never thought of Larxene like that, but this was just beautiful! Good job!

Ok, 1st thing, i have trouble following this, what is larxene doing to namine? 2nd thing...is lesbian sex going on here?

fucking -
nng
hr

yes
So. Much. Yes.

Excellent characterization, and it's short and sweet. Excellent, excellent work.

Though, you write "cackle" - are you sure you don't mean "crackle"? :