that's really good. Please write more soon!

It's not too bad. A little more detail would be nice; but you seem to have a fairly neat, consistent writing style. I look forward to reading more.

your a mean gixie please update when youve written dont make us loyal reviewers wait for someone else.
please.
oh and that was great, the hair isnt by any chance wedged in one of the pages where rosto wrote a note for beka. lol i just felt like plot dropping that one.

Love the story - but please don't make Rosto quit the Rogue! And please keep going!

Okay, I like the story for the most part.
The one big thing I have a problem with, there is now way in Abaddon that you can let him leave the Court.
It's just... blasphemous.
I know George did it.
Butm before he did, he and Alanna were together.
So. It is perfectly possible for it to work out.
Alanna was a knight for Mithros' sake.

And the actual criticism:
I think you should maybe slow down a little.
Just enough for us to be wiggling around in our seats, like a good book should.

This is definitely a star! The plot is quite interesting.

I liked it. But the ending was no ending. It didn't really end. It just breaks of... Sad. Oh well, liked it a lot.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

wow. i think this is really GOOD! i love having both POVs and the lyrics interspersed between. very good. i really like rosto being a big ole softie, i honestly think he'd be like that! i mean, there are lots of guys who have a cool, calm and tough exterior but really...they are all babies underneath! lol. but i really hope he wont give up being rogue...what would he do?! hes like born for the job! so hope you continue with this soon. well done, excellent. :)

I love this (I love all Beka/Rosto fics)-please put up more! (I'll die if you leave it here!)

And about the fluff thing-it depends on the type of story that your trying to write and the amount that you want to put in there. I mean fluff is really good and readers love it but too much fluff can kill a wonderful story.

But this is brilliant and I would love to see more of it soon, XD.

-Jess-

Nice! How do you plan for Beka to figure out that Rosto read her journal? Does he read it again? And why do I have this odd suspicion Pounce will try to play match-maker? Keep writing!

very sweet I love it so far!

It was good. But would she really be going straight to the Kennel right after she woke up? Just wondering. And your completely right about Rosto, we really don't know much about him. But how Tammy writes him, he does seem to be a completel romantic. You're doing a good job with it, keep it up.

Don't make Rosto quit the Rogue! I know that he would be able to, and be able to make a living by playing, but it would be such a waste. Besides, Beka needs to realize that Rosto would never do anything to put her, or their relationship, in danger. She needs to see that he would quit the Rogue for her, but he just wouldn't be the same.

Besides, think of all the sexual tension that would be goin' on! hehe, just joking. Somewhat.

~Idyllic (was Lioness)

It's way too easy, the ending. Nice pairing, but it couldn't, wouldn't happen. There would be more padding, more things happening before that'd happen. Other than that I like.

Ok, so you reviewed mine and i thought i would check out your stories. This is very well written and has a good idea to the story but i have to give some constructive critisism. I think that it would have been better at the end to have Rosto prove that he is not like her mom's guy. Maybe take her out on a picnic or have her see him do some good deed or something, anyways, i like your story i just don't think that after a year Rosto would retire, plus i think that Beka and Rosto would both know that he couldn't do that cause he has to take care of the lower city and that he is probably the best Rogue that there could be. Just what i thought. I really did like this story though. I'll have to check out your others.