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I'm sorry; but Rosalie almost kills Bella, and gets away with it? Somebody needs to biotch slap that witch.

Wait..Did he bite her on purpose? or was it in the heat of the moment, "oh shit, i got out of control"? i was confused on that. but overall your story was incredible

aw... i loved that story so much

its so cutee

and i loved Edward in it.

omg i cant believe that he is going to change her...was it on accident or on purpose?

yay she is going to be a vampy! but i know there has to be some kind of twist right?

well keep writing i cant wait to read more.

This is very good, very original. And I like that you don't break in with author's notes in the middle, trying to explain. Your story does a great job on it's own.

Please, keep writing. This is awesome.

omg this story is amazing so far its so intense! cyber chocolate chips

woah! 12-shot!well hopefully more.

Great Storyy!

:)

I'm not sure when your last review was, but if you've long lost interest in this story, will you please finish it for me?

I'm very much in love with it. You captured the characters so well.

Please Update, Please.

Really good, very well-written. Definatly interesting.

-Alex

Ah! So he bit her?

You're probably going, "Duh, you moron."

OMG! this is amazing!keep writing!

poor jacob. i still like him.