Beautiful work. I really enjoyed The Diary but this, this is art. I hope you do some more poetry soon.. Maybe a Beloved along the same theme? o.o

You just wrote this because you bored?? Imagine what you could write if you really wanted. That was deep. RESPECT!

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Oh...wow, I was extremely impressed. I saw "Poetry" and wondered why in the world no one had reviewed it yet...it's so nice to see a refreshing change-of-pace...

You really have a great gift for perfect word choice. The imagery is astounding, and delivered with such little verse!

Truly lovely. Please post more.