nice! he was really in character :)

That was awesome! And the most wonderful things is--it COULD happen, even though I'm aware that there would never be anything really between those two in the canon story. Still, how realistic this is makes me burn with the flames of MOE~ Lol. Anyway, like I said, moe~mode or not, this is truly an incredible story, and very well written too. Very good, very good, adore it!

Wow. Wow. Please keep going...

Is this story going to be updated? It seems all the GrimmHime ones are being ignored...it makes me sad. Could you update and expand on this great beginning?

Maybe that was why that damn Ulquiorra worshipped Aizen so much – they were both tight-asses who could share facial expressions.


you rock xD

IT is beaautfully written. There were some lines I read (the ones Winter Ash mentioned) and it was so perfect that my life was complete! it was amazing. I really like this odd couple... much better than Ichi/Hime.

One hell of an intricate one-shot, and it's good to see Grimmjow in character, with his bad ass self amazing us always. Great job:)

This is actually a wonderful fic, oneshot though it is. I've been a fan of this (crack-)pairing for a while now, and I think a scenario like this is definitely the best way to get a relationship between these two characters on its feet. Wonderfully written, and a \n interesting take. Hope to see more from you, and especially with this underrepresented couple of characters.

Nice, liked it:)

...You have no idea on how much I love GrimmiHime. XD

I think you got this piece very in character. :) It was very well done!

Yep. That's Grimm. Seems pretty in character to me. =D
Very nice one-shot! Would be nice if something similar happens in Bleach. Haha.

That was amazing. Beautiful language and monologue, and the character portrayal was SPOT-ON. Yeah, my british slang enjoys your radiantly bitchin' story.

Job well done.

I'm so glad that your friend got you to write this ^_^

I just love Grimmjow x Orihime fics.

extremely well written, liked it a lot.

Cha! I'm super excited by this. I think you got Grimmjow great... except the 'woman' part... does he call her that? I can't remember. I usually associate that more with Ulquiorra. But what ev. Oh and instead of 'dept' it should have been 'debt'. Other than that, i found it very entertaining. I loved that she healed him again, because you know she would. And that he won't kill her.

"he still felt the heat and the raging anger that welled up and boiled in the swell of his hollow hole, and it was the closest thing to a heart he had ever had."

Um... i think i died from teh pretty of that sentense. "The closest thing to a heart he ever had" GOO! Realy, I think that's the best thing you've ever written.

This is followed closely by my nextest favoritest line:

"She gave him a tiny smile, almost non-existent, and she had never looked more human."

I can't even begin to tell you how much I love that.

So, I'll take UlquiHime and you take GrimmHime and together... we can take over the world.

Seriously, thought - this was very very very good. Also, the line you chose for the summary is perfect. I made me want to read it (although I would have anyway)