UPDATE THIS NOW!
this is so much better than all of your other stories and really should be at the top of your to do list.

can you update please?! i love this story!

GASP is it Victoria because the flam and her red hair.


they also say someting about the flam on the water in new moon and it was really Victoria!

so if i am right tell me!



UPDATE SOON THIS IS A GREAT STORY!

so, this is my first review ever and I'm honouring you with it, hehe...
ok so I've read a lot of your other stories and I have really liked them, but this one, OMG, i'm loving it, it is kind of different yet it has your style all over it, it is a good different, an interesting different, the kind of story that keeps people like me from going crazy when having nothing to do while waiting for breaking dawn to come out in my third world country :( well any way, different is GOOD...
nice work! keep writing!

:sweatdrop: i still cant think who wrote it. I suck at riddles ok? This fic kicks as s! AND UPDATE MORE OFTEN!! awsome plot line. You love scaring the s hit out of me dont you?

Victoria wrote it. Duur.

Tolkien?

Can't wait for more. How could Bella smell the blood from three floors up, though?

-x-

OO! This story is so GOOD! Did Victoria write the note? I can't wait for more!

my guess is Victoria!

The flame shall be the blame?It's either literall and speaking of fire,or it's Victoria,speaking of her fiery red hair.The line'One last death' seems as if it's a vampire writting it,because it sounds as if they'll change bella...

It's Victoria! "The Flame" because she has red hair! You know, that's realy not bad... I love Victoria's hair...

Anyway! Where was I? I realy love the story so far, but I don't get why Bella HAD to be naked for the last bit. I mean, seriously -- just a towel? I suppose she'd JUST gotten out of the shower, but really.

Anyway! I don't remember what I was saying, but it robably doesn't matter -- I'm in a bt of an odd mood so my typing is really off as well.

Okay, that'd all

Regards
Lemon

That was so confusing! Is this story completed? Are you insane? I didn't get the bits with all the dots... does that mean you haven't written anything to go in the gaps yet? Does it? I'm so damn confused after that! Were those all just preveiws of what's to come?

Lemon

thank you thank you thank you you know you rock dont you

I LOVE IT! write more please!!

ooh...I hope you update soon!! I reallyc want to read the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D