 yukiga aru ai 2008-06-30 . chapter 4 man can u update it plz i am dying here from waiting and i have to review like this because i reviewed this chapter already!! ^~^ |
 kopakanuvafan20 2007-11-29 . chapter 4I loved everyone's reactions especially with Lacus swearing. |
 athenaswings 2007-11-20 . chapter 4nice one. lacus imitation that is not a imposter coughmeercough |
 Zero'N'oveR 2007-11-19 . chapter 4Hahah, "She saw one stunned Kira Yamato, almost naked" Oh god, thats madd funny. Along with her "What the f-" statement. Truly funny, yet serious all at once.
*favs*
Oh, and the Prime Directive on Clyne x Yamato...hm...definately look forwards to.
Update soon
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 YukiGaAruAi 0 CourageousLove 0 2007-11-19 . chapter 4man this fanfic has got to be the best thing ever! to bad thinking up good ideas take so long... plz update soon (I hope it is tonight...) ^_^ |
 sparda 2007-11-19 . chapter 4 great,keep the good work. |
 kopakanuvafan20 2007-11-15 . chapter 3I like how the ship was keeping Flay locked out of everywhere. I wonder who programed that? But why did you have to cut it off right there? |
 Zero'N'oveR 2007-11-13 . chapter 3I fell off my chair from laughter and shock at the last scene. That had seriously gotten me baffled. But, like all good stories, the authors continue the story and further confuses the reader =)
One issue though. Kira is very talented in understanding the OS and the funtions of the Strike. In this chapter, he looks like he isn't as intelligent in the story than in the series.
Also, will the Seed take place in this story?
Great story, update soon
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 YukiGaAruAi 0 CourageousLove 0 2007-11-13 . chapter 3plz plz plz you got to have it up by to night i am dieing to know what happens plz update by tonight plz! ^_^ plz and thx |
 YukiGaAruAi 0 CourageousLove 0 2007-11-10 . chapter 2plz updat again soon it is gettin good |
 kopakanuvafan20 2007-11-10 . chapter 2This is definitly a unique story. I can't wait to see what people say when Lacus is brought on board and they all see they look exactly the same. |
 Zero'N'oveR 2007-11-09 . chapter 2Ah, I read this a few weeks ago, being very interested in the AI/Lacus system. I thought this died ><
I greatly look forward for more of your story.
(Btw, Kira/Lacus moments please, atleast a formal confrontation please?)
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 YukiGaAruAi 0 CourageousLove 0 2007-11-09 . chapter 1its getting interesting plz update soon |
 Guardian Angel Nemo 2007-06-12 . chapter 1nice... |
 00idiot 2007-06-06 . chapter 1Great idea, but the openning bit about the mystery guy could use some clarification; its too vague even for a mystery piece.
The grammer needs some work, but its pretty good. I offer myself up as your editor. |