Nice job. I like the idea of their freindship.

Aw, that's a really cute idea! Not to mention very believable, considering all the two have been through.

Good job~!

~*Digitaldreamer*~

Wow, this is impressive. It's not like any Psychonauts piece I've ever read before, but I love the concept. It's eerie but also cute. I love the back story about the inspector, and I love the way you managed to show a mentorship in a way that's not too corny. I hope you write more like this!

What? no reviews yet? What a great piece! I thought it was really sweet! i'm adding this to my faves as soon as i can log in next!