ohh i likey...

oh wow, just breathtaking and so, so beautiful.
I don't really read much of this ship (bad pun) but this got me, and well, I have a huge soft spot for water and ships and stuff like that and I thought you hit every note wonderfully =)

this is really sweet.
^_^
I love it!

>w< YEY!

God your stuff is so cute! I squeal so loudly my dad looks over from the couch to see what I'm reading.

>w<

I loved it.

~Thatz

This is a beautiful little story. Very well written. You portray Demyx perfectly. Jesh, you're good.

Aw so beautiful ^^

Whoa. How fabulous was this? Really, truly awesome. And non-angst Zemyx *shockhorror*! And I'm on a POTC kick, so this tied my current two obssessions together so beautifully! *tear* Have cookies!

Nicely done. Not my favorate pairing >_> but i can get over that :3. I love the concept of Demyx as a pirate, and I love how you characterized him, with his love of the sea and love of the boat -gets beaten over the head by demyx with his sitar- SHIP I MEANT TO SAY SHIP... Anyways... I love the way you charaterize Demyx ^__^ He seems like a real bad ** (I kinda pictured him like Will in the last movie >3 so hot; so sexy) in this one instead of just a wimp that everyone picks on (I know i've done that >_o even though it bothers me somewhat for him to be like that (I belive in you Demyx!!))

Anyway you get ten thumbs up from me~!

Hm, my pen name seems to have affixed itself to your author's note. Sneaky little bugger.

So. This - I already told you, but this is wonderful. I especially liked when they pulled their gloves off, so they could hold hands. That just did something wonderful to my inner squeebly fangirl. And Demyx's little fumble when he tries to tell Zexion it was his homeworld is just - it sort of brings up, in a very subtle way, how much it must sometimes hurt (or come close to hurting) to remember being human and everything he lost.

In short, I believe Sqeenix can just stick it in their rum, because this is greatness. :)

Oh dearest. I love you. I love you, love you love you love you. Now, take those words, multiply them by a hundred, and /then/ you'd get how much I adored this fic, and how much I love you. I mean...

You know that you're an amazing author, definitely one of the best the Zemyx fandom has. And you know that I think you're an amazing person. But on top of that...it's just so /pretty/! And kudos for having Myde originate from some place outside of Atlantica. I love mermaid!Myde, too, but it's cool having him come from somewhere else. And your reasoning behind it...the words you use...about Myde /knowing/ the sea, knowing what the winds mean, knowing everything about it...they're just lovely.

And then Zexion arrives, and the complete love and devotion there is so palpable; the way he shows up, the way he immediately goes to Demyx...just everything about it. The words you use, the style of writing, their characterizations.../everything/, simply /everything/.

I really can't say thank you enough. I more than adore you, and I hope you always know that! Much love, forever and ever.

-Dual