Woah...didn't see that coming.

Aw these were so cute and you had a really nice balance of characters throughout your drabbles besides zuko and katara

I like the humor you put into this, while still keeping the characters in-character. I looked at the other ones, and some were touching, some were funny, and some were just... yeah. Anyway, you are a very talented writer, to be able to cover so many topics. I wish I could do that... :D

Nice work as always. Keep at it.

I love all these! Well written and emotional :)

Haha... Well played Zuko. Smooth. But I'm glad to see this updated. I really liked this series. Nicely done, keep at it.

seriously, what water bender doesn't know how to swim?

all of these were great!

HA! Brave with the subtext.

PERFECT ending line.

this is so sweet!

*squeal* AW! SO CUTE! FLUFFY! I never thought of Katara not being able to swim.. and at that part you captured her character very well. :3
cookies for you!! keep the fluffiness comin!

Oh, I love this one. Adorable take on "siblings."

Haha, she doesn't know how to swim and he doesn't know how to make a fire without bending! Nice!

these are very cute keep going!

She was trying to give them some alone time with one blanket...*inseret dirty smutty thought here* and he completely blundered it. Poor guy.

From 1) He was tall. Ah, love.
2) At first, it sounds like she was forced into it, and although you get into her wanting it, she still doesn't sound quite happy. But, not unhappy. And then she's scared and it all makes sense. And Zuko's panicked. Aw.
3) STEAM! Win. And 'girl' as an insult. Lovely, Zuko.
4) I was really confused the first time I read this, because I didn't get that the kid was male, so the pronouns didn't match up. It's all good now, though, and so cute.
5) Triangles. :( They so rarely end well. This one managed it, though, I think. Nitpick:
"Absorbing the strike through his fingers, he felt the current shuttle along his rigid limb, his chi choppy instead of flowing, he bent it upward—" sounds like a run-on. Should it split after 'limb?' Right now it feels like he's bending the chi and not the current.
6) Iroh would be the best grandparent EVER.
7) Fire Lord Iroh at last. And the Zutara collision reminds me of "The Notebook" but just inherently much better.
8) Katara as a sister reminds me of Caligula. Go figure.
9) Oh, god. This... just... figures. (I would do this. Either side, really.) Where it would go chronologically confuses me a little, though. After Part 7, as a "Meet the Tribe" hidden scene?

Hm, overall. I LOVE the nonlinear order -- it's so much more fun. Even if it is nonintential, the puzzle piece-feel forces you to pay attention. And the characters seem IC, or at least as if they could have made natural progressions to where they end up. Nice! Thank you!