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| Elliesmeow 2008-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseGreat use of that line form one of my favorite books. Nick sure is a sweetie isn't he? -Ellie |
| emily 2007-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww!! that's so cute!! i love it |
| Space-Case7029 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, as always. Now if only the writers would get in the game with how well this pairing would work and why. Loved it. Audra |
| DarkDreamer56 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWow...just wow. I've always had a certain fondness for your post ep fics, and this one is definitely heading into my favorites for another few readthroughs. The quote that you chose was beautiful, and I love the way that it ties into the story. I really hope that Sara comes out of this alive, and that the writers take the opportunity to expand the relationship between Nick and Sara this way. Amazing! |
| Vengeful 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseYeah! A nice response to my challenge :) And using Jane Austen (I haven't actually read this one, but I did love Pride and Prejudice). Very nice story-I enjoyed the ways Sara was viewing her situation. It seemed very in character. Loved the bit of NS as well :) |
| Agatha2460 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAs I've said before, it's a pleasure to read your fics. Sense and Sensibility is one of my favorite books and to have that and some hints of Sara&Nick was fabulous. x |
| Meg-Breanne 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story idea. I loved it very much. |
| bubble cat 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWow~~I'm losting for words. I don't know is good or bad that this kinda make me want to watch season 8 for some reason. But I want to read your fic more, will there be more soon? n_s |
| januarynineteen 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThank God, I thought you had vanished off the face of the earth or something. Okay, perhaps that’s a tiny bit of a dramatic verbalisation, but you hadn’t posted a new chapter or story in... two weeks? And the CSI section is just so full of GSR lately. You did an excellent job on this. You truly never fail to impress me. I found the concept interesting and you have written it, as always, beautifully. The novel line you used for the beginning was just perfect. What struck me as very good was that you added Nick saying those words Sara once said to him. Continuity is something the producers of CSI seem to be forgetting sometimes. I mean, in season six’s Gum Drops Sara told Nick that “When it’s your day, it’s your day,” and an episode or two later (I believe it’s A Bullet Runs Through It part one) he said something along the lines of “It just was his day, I guess,” without any further reference to the McBride’s case or his burial. Odd cookies, those writers. Anyway, I'll stop my rambling now. Once again, this was brilliant and I’ll be impatiently waiting for your next masterpiece or chapter. :) |
| Elle452 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! I thoroughly enjoy your writing, Forensicfan. You could turn it in to a multi-part fic if you really wanted to...[wishes hard] |
| thjersyjnkx33 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseamazing. i love it. bravo. |
| xoSnickersxo 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was really cute! |
| katydid13 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseExcellent challenge response. I loved that you choose Sense and Sensibility. |
| jdcocoagirl 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abusewow this is awesome... hope this would happen in the show. |
| Nikky's girl 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseaww, i absolutely adored this story, yet another brilliant fic from you! *x/Emily/x* |