Poor Roy! Aaw~ I Love RichKory, but maan I do LOVE Roy Harper i_i~

anyway~ great story! (y)
Very funny while she was "running" from Richard xD

Aww. That was cute!

Awe, that was so cute! In the beginning I was all like, "What?" and yeah... I got confused at some parts, too =/
I really liked it though =)

It was definitely an amusing an idea, and most definetly well written.

-Em

Aw! that was so cute!

~Pirategirl0

I loved the veil bit, that was hilarious! Very well written! I almost cried!

ok three things:
1)it was good
2)the ending was also good but not as good as the rest of the story
3)u used starfire at one point in the story

liked it? LOVED IT!

this was so AWESOME! truelly a master piece ^_^

now that your're in the writing mood, UPDATE Torn

please and thank you's

again, this story was so AWESOME!

^_^

*laughing* ah, *wipes tear from eye*

I can just SEE Kory kicking and screaming and Richard chasing after her in pain. The heels thrown all over the place, the veil off somewhere else, and Richard's tux with this big, heeled foot-print on the stomach.

Awesome job!!

TF

Not bad... The beginning was very well written, but I think it became more disjointed towards the middle; the build-up to the climax was pretty good but I think the ending could be improved upon.

Also, I don't think Roy would just let Kory go so easily. A little more intense drama would have been nice. This story has been written and rewritten so many times, but you didn't really add your own touch to it, I'd have loved to see a touch of your own originality.

Sorry if that sounds too harsh, I just think you're capable of writing better than that. I apologise if you're offended, I didn't mean it that way! Apart from that, however, it was a rather enjoyable read! =)

~The Silver Phoenix