Interesting and a new idea. If I'm not mistaken you put this under 'general'. It should be under poetry since songs and poetry are basically the same thing. Also, you used just a little too much repetition in the ballad. You should have gone into more description about him. However, I did like how you described him. I like the lines, "You are a whisper on the wind; A shadow in the hall". They sounded cool. And you should post Sam's and Tucker's songs.

very cool i got tingles all up my spine and i have no idea why?