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venz07
2009-10-13 . chapter 6
It has to be Nina and Arika!
elfspirit7
2009-08-17 . chapter 6
Awesome! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!
Ookami Z
2009-07-27 . chapter 6
This is so super good! Great job!!I'm rooting for Nina and Arika but if you brought Mashiro (Mai-Otome version) into the picture, perhaps being Haruka's younger sister, then get her with Arika and let Erstin be with Nina! Great story so far! Looking forward for the next chapter!
LunarMiko07
2009-05-25 . chapter 6
This story always brings a smile to my face. I think Nina should choose Erstin!
boredandhelpless
2009-05-18 . chapter 6
Woot! I'm rooting for ArikaxNina!
boredandhelpless
2009-05-18 . chapter 5
Is it me or is Nao getting crazier each chapter?
ALEXISSA2
2009-05-17 . chapter 6
LMAO!! It's too late for Nina to run now...let the competition begins. I look forward to more, thanks.
plasticity
2009-05-14 . chapter 6
Good fun, great zinger lines. In anything, just check your punctuation a little more thoroughly and make sure sentences actually read well. And Erstin. I am pro-Erstin because she got a raw deal, you know? Please? 'sides, what about Mashiro?
Ryu
2009-05-14 . chapter 6
This sequel is just as hilarious as the first one, I actually wind up laughing myself silly over certain sections of it. Unfortunately I'm a bit sad to see you go with the romantic triangle thing - clearly Nina and Arika are meant for one another in this fic, and don't forget, in these fics the Fujino always get the Kuga, no exceptions - I think I'd rather have seen chaos springing from Haruka (god I love your version of her and Nao XD ) trying to forcibly marry off the various Kuga/Fujino couples.
Besides, the way you write them I find myself thinking Mikoto and Erstin would be cute together, if only they weren't cousins. Of course cousins can work too, in a pinch... or else just throw in this little sister of Haruka's and pair Erstin up with her. Who IS Haruka's little sister by the way? At this rate I'm half afraid it will be Otome-version Mashiro. ^.^;;
Akira Sasaki
2009-05-11 . chapter 6
WOW. That was chaotically HELLA funny!! xD

Woot! Update more please!

-Akira
colorfulsunrise514
2009-05-11 . chapter 6
Nao is really into herself and its hilarious! Poor Natsuki, she doesn't seem to have the house to herself with Shizuru. And Nina, she is just in the middle of it all. It was a nice chapter. I can't wait for the action of the competition!
-A-Fragment-Of-Reality-
2009-05-11 . chapter 6
Hehe I can't wait to see how this turns out ^^ Though I do feel a bit sorry for Nina.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next!
Ume sama
2009-05-11 . chapter 6
LOL'd all the way through again. I do have a question, why is Shizuru just Fujino? Shouldn't she be Kuga-Fujino or Fujino-Kuga? She's married now.

Why did Nina not have a reaction to the bracelets? I still really like the level headed Mikoto. Her responses would be too priceless in real life.
Demel aka Sugador
2009-05-11 . chapter 6
ERS ERS ERS ERS ERS!
XD the time capsule was really sweet!
emtz95
2009-05-11 . chapter 6
hahaha... i cant wait till the next chapter... hahaha... even nao's dad was stupid as nao... *contented sigh* hahaha... good luck on the next chapter...
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