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| Mrs. James Norrington 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, God, for shame!... Sorry. I'm listening to Michael Ball... That was simply beautiful! I love your characterization of Enjolras. |
| Forever A Fool of Fortune 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseOh that was fantastic. I loved it!! |
| Kim Who Knows 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this! An interesting perspective I haven't seen before. Well written! |
| Orestes Fasting 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice fic. :) Well-written, and genuinely so, unlike a lot of the serviceable but mediocre prose that's been floating around the section lately. And I liked how neatly the title tied into the premise of the fic. I'm afraid I can't join in on the general praise of your OC; I didn't see much more in him than the old, flat stereotype of a naive boy soldier. But of course he wasn't the focus of the fic so much as a lens through which to view Enjolras and Grantaire, and you did a good job of that. I would much, much rather see a naive-boy-soldier OC than a naive-boy-soldier Enjolras, so kudos for that, and for having your Frenchboys go out in style. |
| Sword Pen 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseHERE HERE! Love your OC! He was perfectly believable... |
| LesMisLoony 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely fantastic! June 6th brought out the best fanfiction I've seen in a long time. I almost wanted to cry! Ahh, this made me so happy... |
| Arduenna 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing. It honestly was. I love how you characterised Aubin, and how he viewed Enjolras. I really liked the bit where he was watching Enjolras smile. It was beautifully done. The gaurds seem so hesistant to shot Enjolras, so this really fits in with canon. And my plan to write drabbles? Probably not for a while. I've just gone back to school, and our summer holidays aren't for 7 weeks, and that's probably when I'll get a chance to write them, since school keeps me rather busy. But I promise you I'll write something in the summer. ^_^ BTW, I've added you to my favourite authors list. |
| BregoArodShadowfax 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseYes, may they never be forgotten! I have it marked on all my calendars and I'm wearing the Miz shirt in their honor. I like the portrayal of the frightened guardsman, because personally I've always wondered why a comment like that would be made when they were about to execute somebody. GAAH...can't think about Enjolras dead...or the rest of them. That's why they LIVE in my story...well, most of them...anyway, always enjoy reading your posts! |
| sparxxa 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseFantastic fic! Well done! and a Happy Barricade Day to you too! |
| frustratedstudent 2007-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseGotta love those guys. I liked Aubin's perspective. Very good mon amie. Your writing is getting better each time. |
| Jehannish 2007-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this! Great point of view on the story. And well written. HAPPY BARRICADE DAY! |