wow. this is good stuff. i mean, i haven't read much romantic fanfiction as... nice as this. Subtile and not too over the top.

the only fault i can find is the way your version of batman speaks. he just reminds me of my grandad. i just can;t imagine batman saying "very well". in my opinion, a depressed batman wouldn't say a whole lot anyway.

i like the way you somehow portray robin as an innocent eight-year old. i don't know if thats what you were going for but its cool

;)

Better late than never to review right? The start of one of the best Superman/Wonder Woman stories ever. I probably should remember but I don't but during the SM vs WW why did SM say, "Pax" while tangle in WW's lasso. I always had a fondness for Maxima since SM:TAS. Too bad Diana never did what Maxima to SM in Warrior Queen. I'm glad you're one of the authors who have it right that it's Batman and Selina and not Batman and well you know. :D

I loved this story. There are very few Wonder Woman/Superman fics out there and some of them aren't very good or are too short. This here my friend is a work of art and pure genius and I was very pleased at what I read. There were a few mistakes in grammer and some of your sentences you didn't complete but all in all I got a good understanding of it! I will check out the sequel!

animeroxz

Bloody good story. update soon please?

No! He can't have left! Is this the end? Great story.

Very interesting, I wonder if Diana will act on how she felt after Clark left.

Your story is interesting and well written. I hope to read the other chapters soon.

This had to have had some of the best dialogue I've ever read!

The section here had me downright guffawing with laughter! Very clever! :D

-quote-
"You're one to talk with that uniform of yours!"

She looked at him with a frown."What is wrong with it?It is strong and functional..."

Flash replied, amused,"Yeah,you believe that,god bless you."
-end quote-

On a side note: Poor Bruce. :(

Good job! I hope to read Chapter 3 soon.

It's good so far. I hope you update it. :)

This story is great. Will there be other chapters?