I was randomly searching around (to avoid my homework...I am SO shneaky -rolls eyes-) and found this.

...Awesome!

I love poetic things--you really captured Raven's emotions here! I love the rhyme scheme...and all the imagery...and-

Shutting up now. XD One thing: Try to avoid ellipses in poems. It gets a bit knock...ish when those are there. (-looks at ellipses in review- I am such a hippocritter. XD)

Er...Keep it up! =D

Hey, it's Semi. :)

I enjoyed this quite a lot. It was really powerful and amazing. Also, this may sound strange, but I would have given up if I tried to rhyme with 'difficult' because it takes a lot of creativity. :)

That was rely good! Did u win? U totally should have cuz it was gr8t! :):):)

Are they havin the contest again? Cuz I could enter my sotry about Raven. I luv Raven! Are u entering again?

Gr8t job! :):):):):)

~Tiff

I like this very much, I thought you captured Raven perfectly. Thanks...Gerry