I really love that line, " ... please don't let it break us apart."

Well I hope you can get the new version out soon.

Looks like I have to wait... Update... soon

I figured Sonomi would be fine with it. I mean, she even admitted in the book that she loved Nadeshiko the most. Although it might have been in a different way than...this.

This kind of story...tragic(!). So sad...and well-written too...definitely and interesting pairing...I would expand on the setting/surroundings just a bit.

ok. well i can't wait to read the rewrite. lol i wont kil u either. in my oppoin sometimes when u have to wait it makes u even more excited to read it. lol. but im also a lil impatient. lol

Hey! Maybe you could write both? (Though that might be undoable.)

I'm a fan of this!

/keep writing. ^^

wow, this is very nerve racking. lol. i really like it! i cant wait to find out wat happens next. update soon

not reAlly A fAn of "incest" but wow, you do write effectively. you mAde me think "whAt the...let them be together even if the're siblings for cryon' out loud!..dArn those rules!" heheh...good one. first incest story i've ever liked. :) hope you'll continue this! :)

Please, please, please update soon! I started watching CCS again recently (I hadn't seen it in about nine years), and I kept thinking "I want Touya and Sakura together!" Even though I knew it wouldn't happen. This fanfic has brought that hope to life, and I really would like it if you would continue. ...With more Touya and Sakura moments (blushes). You're also a very good writer! I love your style. You also seem cute xD (Take that as a complement!) Anyway, I love this =]

Oh no! please please make there relationship work! they need one another..

can't wait till this is updated it's great.

you really should continue this. :)

This is quite a good story. Of all the voices you employ I think you do Sakura's best. My favorite part of the story thus far was the chapters in which Touya confessed and Sakura ran away plus the chapter Sakura returns the confession. Both times (as well as when they make up), her voice and internal monologues were wonderfully done.

The other thing I like about this story is the convincing manner in which you handle Touya and Sakura's emotions and behavior in this situation, definitely not a simple task. Great job.