Good going!

Most excellent!

Depends on what you mean by betrayal. I think he betrayed her by leaving Harry there and paying no attention to her misgivings.

Oh no Hermione went to Privet Drive? Or a friend of Dudleys?

Superb start!

You just stopped. No closure, this does not even qualify as a cliffhanger. What a waste of my time.

This has been quite the entertaining story so far, I can't wait for more!

Keep going!

That was a fun chapter, but there's no more! Do you plan on updating the story?

Very cool! The first time I've ever heard of a story where Minerva and Albus take Harry into their home. I also like the HP HG thing.
Who is the son Minerva and Albus lost? Will we ever find out? Forgive me, but I don't remember if he died, or was kidnapped. Either way, I'm glad they'll have Harry.

Fantastic story! I strongly urge you to write more!

REALLY REALLY GOOD! cant wait for the next chapter!

Interesting! I like Harry's speculation about the wards around Privet Drive, and how he and McGonagall don't quite know how to behave around each other.

I'm sorry I didn't review this chapter before; it was great, and I love how you capture a reader's attention, like a author's hook. Very few Adventure stories are good and yours is one of the best I've read!

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I beg an update. This is amazing. I love it, great work.