It's an original plot. I like it. Good job. Sorry for the short review, btw. I'm as eloquent as a fruit right now.

This was absolutely darling. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am really happy with it for some reason. The poetry ingrained into it was wonderful and the plum poem is making me want to look up more of Williams's work. This was beautifully written and full of subtle little details I'm not even sure I can explain. I really want to know Remus's reaction if Harry ever tells him, but not knowing is nice all the same. I don't know why. Thanks for writing this; I enjoyed it much.

God, this was incredibly good! I like stories that are sad without the sentimentality... It's all so minimalistic. Great job :)

I'm putting this in my favs!

This is a rather touching and morose piece.

It is nicely written, and the characters are believable.

Oh, Remus.

It is quiet and beautiful. I enjoyed the William Carlos Williams. :)

Some lovely phrases:

"The house recoiled at summer."

"Remus couldn't draw women well enough to tell." ! I think this line is perfect and telling and...e. Really, really. I can't explain it, but it's...quite perfect there.

So, the disappearing ode. I be curious.

Wonderful work!

That was a beautifully written story.

I could picture the stillness of the empty house, the books and paper, and the poetry.

Thanks!

I can't put my finger on exactly what it is, but I loved this so much. It was just fantastic.

Favorited.

this is so sweet and so sad, it kind of broke my heart to read it. it's really good.