THIS AS ADORABLE. I WENT 'AW!' (not joking!)

And usually one can refraine from doping such a thing in the school computer room! I'm getting funny looks as I grin like an idiot at what looks like nothing to everyone else. 8D HA!


But yeah! I loved it. So cute. seriously. 8D

that was so cute!! i loved it

i love this oneshot its so sweet it makes my hearts melt

When is kid day?

XD!~ That is so CUTE!

*dies out of fluff*
My goodness, this is so adorable. Good work.

FLUFF...
-heart-
I lived this fic. It was so cute.. -hugs it-

aww that was soo funny and adorable xD I luved it so much!

*fangirl screams and goes into a compulsive, kawaii seizure*

That was SO cute! My favorite part was the beginning with the bell and Kratos grabbing Lloyd's hands like "Don't you dare!" xD I giggle-snorted, thankfully, more giggle than snort because I'm in school and it would freak out my class.

I agree with Ark Navy. Lloyd's dialouge, while cute and chibi, seemed a bit off to me. I'm an only child (thank Martel), so I'm not around children that much, but still seemed weird. Then again this IS Lloyd we're talking about, and Lloyd is known for being off. And Kratos actually in a "Fatherly" character setting is always the best. *sigh* Anna got to sleep with him every night... LUCKY!

"When is it Kid Day?" LOL! Silly, silly Lloyd. That made me chuckle.

Overall, I LOVED it! Keep up the good work! *snuggles Kratos plushie* Happy Daddy's Day! *favorites*

this is good it's touching. i liked it it's sweet. it's cool

I thought the concept was great and I really liked how you had Kratos play up the role of the "father"--something most fics (understandably) don't do for fear or OoC-ness. However, the length of this really compliments that. ...I am not sure how, but I feel it does. XD

One thing that didn't fit--and trust me when I say this, as I've been stuck around kids under the age of 5 for the past couple days--kids at the age of three speak... in much simpler phrases, and NEVER say anything with the 'written-out-pronunciation'. For instance, if I ever heard a kid of that age say, “You know daddy more than I know daddy.", I think they'd receive a literal, "WTF?!" as well as a, O__O;; Serioulsy, they'd be little freakin' geniuses in my mind from that day on. Also, little kids DO know some of the basic tenses, such as past tense for some verbs, and given they may not know when to use them properly, but they do know them. And if they don't, it turns into (verb)ed, whether right or not.

But got ahead and forget that, if you wish. ^^ If you'd rather it be a bit easier to read and understand, then by all means, you're in control. And like I said before, great fic! :D

Ack! I can imagine Lloyd...so cute!! Well done; it's not hard to read and it's easily understandable. What's more is it suddenly brightened up my morning a little bit.

Aw...that was so cute! I love how you wrote little Lloyd's character! I wish I could give him a hug! And I loved the ending! "When is it Kid Day?" Hahahahaha...priceless! I used to ask my dad that same question when I was little! Great job on this fic!