 AlyssaLLBlack13 2008-01-08 . chapter 20This is really, really good. Update soon please! |
 SmileILoveEggplant 2007-12-27 . chapter 20Just to let you know, you've got a few inconsistencies here, when it comes to dates. And one where you were talking about Collins...and, unless I'm insane, you had killed him a couple years previous.
Other than that, however, I'd just like to let you know that this made me cry. Thank you for making my day. (You're going on Author/Story Alert, so update soon!) |
 GelphieLove 2007-12-17 . chapter 20this is so sad... |
 Birdhearted 2007-12-17 . chapter 20Wow, poor Maureen... |
 Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2007-12-17 . chapter 20 wah! what a sad chappie! update soon! |
 Tina101 2007-12-17 . chapter 20Every time I read this story it's so depressing!! I feel HORRIBLE for Maureen!!
~Tina101 |
 ElvenCompanion 2007-12-17 . chapter 20I feel so bad for poor Mo. It must be one of the hardest things to loose a baby. Just the idea of it rips my heart out and I don't even have kids.
Keep up the awsome updates. |
 GirlInTheMirror121 2007-12-17 . chapter 20aww very sweet, very sad :( Update soon! |
 GirlInTheMirror121 2007-11-13 . chapter 19poor MoJo! aww this story is so sad :( I loves it tho great job, update soon! |
 Maureen Olivia Lockhart 2007-11-12 . chapter 19Gahh I love this story so much. |
 Birdhearted 2007-11-10 . chapter 19Wow, Poor Maureen... |
 Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2007-11-10 . chapter 19this chapter made me tear up! awesome job & update soon! |
 Tina101 2007-11-10 . chapter 19Aw...poor Maureen and Joanne! Puppies are fun, just not the same as kids though.
~Tina101 |
 Tina101 2007-09-25 . chapter 18For some reason, this chapter was the most depressing to me. I don't know why, maybe Maureen's whole attitude and everything. Anyway, update soon please!
~Tina101 |
 Maureen Elphaba Thropp 2007-09-24 . chapter 18this is getting really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really good. update soon! |