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DeviousAlias 2008-08-01 ch 1,	abuseThis was entertaining to read! I like Andrew a lot, it was hilarious to see Mojo's and Blossom's reaction to seeing someone who spoke like Mojo. It seems very possible for Mojo to be dyslexic, and the way he reacted (being upset at first) fits perfectly. I don't have much to say. Good story. -The Deviant.
Aurora-Powerpunk 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseLol I liked this story. ^_^
NigaleCross 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuseGood story. Mojo seemed like he could be handicapped in some way from the way he talks.
charisma 2007-09-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseouch someone took a serious blow to their ego for blossom a serious blow to her ego would be another bad haircut from her silly sisters
Sky-Pirate-Tat 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abuseWhy haven't I read this already? I should be shot for not doing so sooner. Really great. Well written and funny. I like how you did your research too. I can completely see this being a PPG episode.
The Illustrious Crackpot 2007-08-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is very interesting. That is to say, it interests me, as if it didn't (interest me) then I would not be commenting on how very interesting it is. And oh how interesting it is, as it captures my attention and interest in such an interesting way that I must inform you immediately of the extremely interesting nature of this work. (PHEW!) This's great—most writers completely ignore Mojo's hysterical speech patterns, and just write him like any run-of-the-mill evil monkey, but you got him spot-on. I liked that scene where he met the other "dyslexic", and his chummy conversation with Blossom at the end was cute. FINALLY a break from all the Rowdyruff madness on the main page of the PPG category. Good job!
BubblyShell22 2007-06-21 ch 1,	abuseGreat story. I can see this happening too. You are a good writer. I hope to read more stories from you soon. The Bubbly One, Shell
Loren 2007-06-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is the first PPG fic I have ever read, and I loved it. You really captured Mojo's way of speaking perfectly. All of the characters were great. I never really thought about his way of speaking as a disease or disability. i guess it really could be. The ending was wonderful. I can't wait until you update Hearts of Fire, but don't rush. This may just make me read your other fic. Maybe. Well, good job with the fic, and good luck with your others.
Commander 2007-06-07 ch 1,	abuseWhat? No kiss? Blasphemy, I tell you! XD All kidding aside, however, this was a thoroughly enjoyable story. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this. It does make me wonder if there are actually people out there with Mojo's "condition". Again, great story, thanks for posting! I know you agree with me when I say that it's nice to see a story that isn't PPG/RRB crop up around here. :)
Itanu 2007-06-07 ch 1,	abuseMiss Dracori, That was a nice little fic. It was funny at times, and it was nice to see an explanation for Mojo's method of speaking. Your grammar, as far back as I can remember, is flawless. Well done. Your spelling is also perfect, unless I missed something. Good job. As said before, I like the article as a whole. It explains Mojo's speaking habits (which, by the way, you captured VERY well, along with the canonical personalities of the other characters. I also like the ending. However, the page itself is a little long. I had to go through the trouble of re-finding (though that isn't really a word) my place when I returned to the fic from a break. Also, I would just like to mention on the side that humans qualify as animals, just for the record. All-in-all, this was a cute fic. It was a little long, but it is a satisfying experience with enough even better moments to make it shine. Until next time, Miss Dracori! I'll get to reviewing the next chapter of Through the Eyes of an Outcast as soon as possible! Signed with Humility, Itanu the Author.
anyone 2007-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseDon´t worry about the lenght. It is as it most be from the begining. In my opinion, a fin doesn´t need to be soo large in looks to be soo good.

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