OH. I loved this so much! :D The best VfV I've read in a very long time. You're an amazing writer - they're perfectly in character. And angst in V's POV is always good, but it need a little humour too, like you wrote it.
Great work!

I think I liked V's POV better than Evey's. Don't get me wrong, both were great, but just the way you made V's mind race around amused me. It seemed very much like him to analyze everything for hidden content and the like.

Maybe I like it better because I really like stories where the reader figures stuff out at the same time as the character. I feel much more involved in the story. There was this book called Nine Princes of Amber and you are introduced to the main character who has amnesia. He's trying to figure out who the hell he is, yet not give away his problem to his possibly deceitful and homicidal siblings. It's great.

Anyway, nice twoshot; you really got into the mind of these characters!

FINALLY! Someone actually brought up the topic of what could've happened in those rehab camps. If they did all that crap to V I'm sure that Evey didn't have a picnic either.

I'm too lazy to log in; I'm sorry!

but not too lazy to read and critique your fic...your characterizations are fresh and true to life; I think you're my new favorite VFV writer! LOL

I have to echo another review. I would love to see you continue this, and where you go with it.

I hope you add more to this.. this kind of makes me happy XD

Whats gunna hapen?!!?

*UPDATE OR DIE!

very sweet. it projects an interesting image and sets forth even more questions. I like it...keep going with these.