this is so freaking cute, I love it. XD Toph so needs a bff like mamoru!

I really love with story :) like the whole idea about this 3rd person coming in and the way u put across that Sokka was abit "duh" about the whole situation was right on target. Wish you could write more! hehe

This story's so cute. Mamoru is kinda Toph's gay best friend... (in sense) I dunno if that's where you're going with it, but that's what I get.
Mamoru's plantin' some seeds in Sokka's oh so oblivious brain.
-Mandi (Toruh)

A wonderful story. I don't know why I never read it before. I hope you finish the last chapter soon. And Mamoru is so sweet! At first I thought he was younger, but him being 17 makes a lot more sense.

No, I didn't notice it was the jerky vendor man! Very clever!

I loved your story! plz update soon!

Oh my gosh I LOVE Mamoru! Great story. Keep up the good work!

Mamoru is such a good kid =]
His intentions is a little bit fishy though . . . creepy perhaps, but I like him so far~ he deserves a huuge reward, give him something =D
is there a next chapter for this? And i'm also interesting on that Extra Notes about Big Brother and Mamoru.

great great! keep it up!

This is like a Tokka shipper's dream come true! *Adds story to favs list* Mamoru's so helpful! And poor Toph, and Sokka, too; hangovers must hurt pretty bad when you've had half a dozen tankards of alcohol the night before. XD Please keep writing; I can't wait to see what happens next!

update you must i love sokkaxtoph this story is so cute
i hope to see more action in the future

Well, I can't write for **. I can, however, read. And I'm enjoying it.

It's pretty in character, except for Toph revealing everything so easily.

Finish this story please, I enjoy it A LOT and I would really like to hear the ending. Wonderful story, by the way, and I like the character Mamoru you made up, it makes the story more interesting to read. Tokkaness! >w

You just have to finish this fanfic! It's one of my all time favorites! The best portrayal of both characters. Kudos! Keep it up!

Best ever! When are you going to finish? You must! X3