lol cool chapter. short but good. cant wait to read more!

~A~K~

Surrender!? She kidnaps Little Axel and Demyx and now she's asking us to Sudderender? THAT COW! LET ME AT HER, I'LL KILL THAT YAOI FANGIRL!

*Ahem*, GaaLee, Just, just why? Didn't Gaara try to kill Lee? Twice!?

Lol. Roxas got 'Rolled'. xD, Good job.

Great story! Cant wait until the next update! dont keep us waiting 'to' long ok?! lol good luck!


-Audra

Zexion and Axel are so cute! xD

YAY! BROWNIE KING~! xD

-Gasp!- Mini Axel with a flamethrower is a definate no no no! xO ...Yet it's such a cute image xD

Aw, mini Luxord fell down the stairs Dx

Ah! Sorry I didn't review earlier, my computer was being a pain. I couldn't go on anything for 5 minutes before it shuts down on it's own.

Anyway awesome chapter! Of course Demyx would like the water, and I'm a tree! Oh, a coconut!

You just had to bring in Kayla didn't you? :D. Well, I guess I can give you the explanation on how they escaped-

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“OMGOMGOMGOMG!” Spectre shouted running around Yaoi Hell.

Spectre went into a segment of Yaoi Hell, there, was thousands of computers. Everyone was forced to read Normal Pairings or Humor/Horror stories. Every other fanfic was locked. (Don’t forget that there where thousands of Yaoi deaths in Chapter 12.)

Spectre turned around the first chair, which had Kayla on it all exhausted and in long, orphan like clothes, like every other Fangirl and boy.

“Resident Evil 4: Wii Edition is coming to the Wii! Ahh! My first chance to play it! We should hold a theme here! Maybe Zombies roaming over hell! Ah! So many ideas!”

All of Spectre’s minions, who looked exactly like him except really small jumped in joy.

A dark portal opened and K.O stepped out with Zexion and a girl similar to K.O, except much darker.. “Spectre, this has gone on long enough. Set these fangirls free.” K.O said.

“Not until…” Spectre said.

“Shut up!” The dark K.O said, grabbing mini-spectres and throwing them all over the place. “These things uber Kawaii!”

Spectre made a closed zip motion with his mouth.

“Now, are you gonna set these fangirls free?” Zexion said holding a rather large book.

“mfh mfh mmfh mmf mfh mmfh.” Spectre said.

”Answer me.” Zexion said calmly.

Spectre did an un-zipping motion with his mouth.

“Not until they’ve atoned for their actions.” Spectre said.

“Then you leave me no choice. Yam, go ‘pwn’ him.” K.O said to her dark self.

“And so it is written, and so it shall be done!” Yam said.

“What are you gonna do? Hyperactive me to death?” Spectre said.

“Yaoi Hentai!” She shouted. “My Powers!” Spectre shouted.

“Rush him!” Zexion shouted.

All the Yaoi Fangirls got out of their chairs and trampled over Spectre. “Though here!” K.O shouted opening a portal. All the Yaoi fangirls ran though the portal one by one.

One of the fangirls came out of a large steel door in the wall. “Look! I grabbed meself a Nintendo Wii!” She shouted.

”You can’t touch that!” Spectre shouted.

All of the fangirls (except Kayla and the Slashbusters team), Zexion, K.O and Yam went into the portal. Spectre got up to try to chase them, but was detained by the remaining fangirls. “Get offa me!” Spectre shouted.

“When Hell freezes over.” Kayla said. They took the Powerless Robot to one of the computers, Kayla then went on ‘Deviant Art”, she pressed a few buttons and a slideshow came on, it was of Sora and Riku hugging…

“What is this!?” Spectre shouted.

”A little slideshow, the pictures start off as Low-PG13 then makes it way up to High NC-17.” The group laughed and tied Spectre to the chair, who was too weak to get out.. “See you later now!” they said before opening a portal and disappearing.

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Am I the most bashed Author character in history? I sure am.

You may tempt me from killing K.O for helping SonicxAmy pairing, but if you want Shadow to live, keep Spectre on the othe rside of the Earth, then lock him in a steel cage, and have Shadow pray. Because, nevermind Yaoi, Americans and SonicxAmy, I. HATE. SHADOW.

But the portal, what was that? Hmm...Is the villian Shadow now? Well, apart from Yam.

Oh my.

Heheh! The best chapter yet! -.-, Hm...Spike. Ravage...hedgehog fox thing, give me back my arm so I can kill you with it!

You were strangling Knuckles? What if K.O found out? I might as well punch Demyx in the face.

Sorry I didn't review last chapter, my internet has gone completely mad. I got it fixed last night though. The last chapter was really funny too.

Pointy = Sharp = Knife = Pain = Death = Spectre Like. So yes, you got that spot on.

You have a trademark! Zexion and his Little Camera.

-Lord Spectre X

Ah, I know how you feel.

Its true! Everything is bigger in Microsoft!

What the? I reviewed! And it submitted.

Well, anyway, funny chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Shouldn't let me around young Luxord, tell him nasty things about Americans, no wait, that's a good thing!

Good luck! Looking foward to next chappie!

...I see there are cameos now. Hm...