Aww... I hate and love death-fic: They make me feel horribly depressed, but a really good one makes it worth it. Well, this one was worth it. XD Something about that first couple of lines really hits hard, like you're actually inside someone's head. Keep writing!
--AG

Beautiful. So sad i just had to cry. Wonderful!

Oh my god, Luffy got killed or maybe he washed up on a shore with no memory of anything that happened. Sorry I read another fanfic like this. This fanfic is good and the way you ended it was perfect.

Wow, that was soo sad! I can't stop shaking...amazing job!

I like it, you should totally continue. XD It's kinda hard bringing a character back after they supposedly died, or even picking up the mood after such a sad chapter, but I'm sure you could do it! ^.^

Uwah, you need to continue this, Ha-chan~

;_; Wah... DEATHFIC NO! D:
And who are you kidding, no pairings, it's totally ZoLu!
Or... Merryship. :D
Okays, anyway, it made me cry again, so. GOOD JOB!

Yay! You posted it! ^_^ This is still a good deathfic indeed.

gahh!! continue CONTINUE! so. sad. I NEED A HAPPY ENDING!

O.o"

This is so sad yet good at the same time! I love it! Keep up the good work!