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| Rose of Death 2008-07-19 ch 9, | abuseFacinating story, can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you can update soon! |
| Bixata 2008-07-01 ch 9, | abuseHarsh bit with Daniel, but well done and thanks for covering it. I hope things work out between them. Good to see Sagi back on his feet and helping his father come to terms with what he had to do. |
| Skycross 2008-06-29 ch 9, anon. | abuseI like your story. It's an interesting view about O'neill. And I find fascinating the relationship between he and Daniel. I'm most curious to see how thing will revolve. I will look forward for the update. |
| Goddess Koi 2008-06-16 ch 9, | abuseOoh *chants* sen-ti-nals Yay, finally reviewed, and I must say it is absolutely awesome! =D Ooh, I can't wait for the next chapter xD |
| PenguinBoy 2008-06-08 ch 8, | abuseInteresting story. I like how you're involving the ancients. Though I do have to wonder how anybody could stand surviving 50 million years. It's not much compared to some thing, but for a living being, that's a really long time. How are any of them still sane? I'm looking forward to when the Ori arrive now. I didn't like the much in season 9, and I haven't finished watching season 10, but I'm hoping with the way you're involving the ancients in your story that things will get more interesting. I haven't read any Jack/Daniel slash before, so I have yet to form an opinion on that. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| The Lady Reaper of the Shad... 2008-05-09 ch 8, | abusemeh jack was asking for it when he called him loki!! |
| Bixata 2008-05-08 ch 8, | abuseSomehow I don't think the team would have accepted Jack's explanation as calmly as they did, despite everything they've seen through the Stargate. However, this angst-free, humorous approach is much more entertaining. Thanks for the update. |
| Goddess Koi 2008-05-08 ch 8, | abuse“Stop threatening my scientist Jaden,” Jack growled. Best line, hands down. Although it seems like it should be in a Jack/Sam centril story xD Anywho, awesome and such, keep going, blah blah BOO!! x] |
| Goddess Koi 2008-04-27 ch 7, | abuseYay! Finally you pull back the rest of SG1 Keep up the good work! [and again, I'm not really good at reviewing =P] |
| The Lady Reaper of the Shad... 2008-04-27 ch 7, | abusehehehehe!! brilliant cliffie! |
| Bixata 2008-04-26 ch 7, | abuseLooking forward to the next part. You've got everything happening so quickly it's hard to keep up with all the characters but in a way it's nice how everything just moves along. Kinda contradictory, but there you have it. And I love the relationship between Jonathan and Jeremiah, that is so brotherly love. Although I think Jack and Daniel have that same understanding between each other as well. |
| moonjess 2008-04-19 ch 6, | abuseInteresting, looking forward to reading more. |
| The Lady Reaper of the Shad... 2008-03-30 ch 6, | abusei'm very greately intrigued... can't wait till you post more! |
| Goddess Koi 2008-03-27 ch 6, | abuseI finally finished!! Wow, that took me what, 3 weeks to read >.< I really need to sit for longer periods of time. Awesome story, and sorry it's not much of a review =] |
| Bixata 2008-03-16 ch 6, | abuseAdmittedly, I haven't got a clue what's going on, but you write it very well. I would like to know what happened with the rest of SG-1. Thanks for the update. |