the end was hilarious and I love it! congrats for a wonderful story and well done! keep it up and take care!

This had the potential of being really good, but you repeat yourself too much and it really makes it difficult for the story to come real. its also too mushy, but to each his own and all that!

X3 I loved it X3

~♥ Cookie

xD I loved this fic... I listened a song called: Scars by Papa Roach and I thought that it fit the fic really well... you should try to listen it...

Scars by Papa Roach:

I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut
My weakness is that I care too much
And my scars remind me that the past is real
I tear my heart open just to feel

I'm Drunk and I'm feeling down
And I just wanna be alone
I'm ** 'cause you came around
Why don't you just go home?
'Cause I channeled all your pain
And I can't help you fix yourself
You're making me insane
All I can say is...

[Chorus:]
I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut
And my weakness is that I care too much
And our scars remind us that the past is real
I tear my heart open just to feel

I tried to help you once
Against my own advice
I saw you going down
But you never realized
That you're drowning in the water
So I offered you my hand
Compassion's in my nature
Tonight is our last stand

[Chorus]

I'm drunk and I'm feeling down
And I just wanna be alone
You shoulda' never come around
Why don't you just go home?
'Cause you're drowning in the water
And I tried to grab your hand
I left my heart open
But you didn't understand
But you didn't understand

Go fix yourself

I can't help you fix yourself
But at least I can say I tried
I'm sorry but I gotta move on with my own life
I can't help you fix yourself
But at least I can say I tried
I'm sorry but I gotta move on with my own life

[Chorus x2]

wow. Naruto's really messed up in here isn't he? I loved the way you potrayed him...it really works. I love how he's in deniel, he won't accept sasuke at all...its wonderful!

Cute story, but for the japanese, in "Boku un aishitemasu"
what is un supposed to mean? o_o
Do you mean to use mo? (It means "also" if you didn't know ^^;)
I don't think that there's a particle "un" in the japanese language...
Sorry, I'm just in my second year of learning japanese, so ignore me if I'm wrong

Love it! Even though u wrote this a few months back I still love it! It's so good!! If the real manga was like this then I would die happy! I'm serious!! Thanks for uploading!

Beautifully written... amazing... (insert standard New York Times Best Seller review stuff here) ya. Way 2 Go!

XD LOVED IT!

this story was really cute...i really enjoyed reading it...

Shikamaru-Naruto13

Kick that mother **'s **! HOW DARE HE RAPE NARUTO!!

that was freaking awsome, you are a great writer i cant wait to read more of you're work!

oh yes. simply marvelous. wonderful, even.

bahaha.


i like to think my perverted comments and the fact that it was written at like 2 o'clock in the monring had a lot to do with it's awesomeness.


luv.cici.

loved it very funny and really good two shot in the end naruto won aneway poor sasu-chan

lol
thanx 4 brightening my day i havent read a sasu/naru in a awile and i loved that this was one of the first

WeIrD-fRoG
(soon to be Human-Eating-Panda(HEP)

hahahah i loved the ending \
^.^