I know it's rather pointless to ask, seeing as it's been three years since this has been updated, but you could ease possibly write more? It's very good.

A beautiful story is unraveling here, all I can say is I hope an adventure begins and that Jack Sparrow and Barbossa get involved some how. That would be awesome, thanks :)

love love love love love! please write a sequal...i love this one so much! i especially want to know about what happens at the governor's ball. :)

I have read all 3 of your stories, and I must say I am impressed. Your weight quality is positively amazing, and you write like a professional. I am speechless by how wonderful this is, and can't believe it took me this long to discover these stories. Bravo, my friend. Bravo.

I don't know why, but this is one of my favorite chapters in the story :) I guess the idea behind it is just so romantic. Brilliant story friend.

I just wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed reading this story1 It's a very believable take on what could happen next. Great characterization! It's been so long since you updated I assume you've abandoned it for now, which is sad. But I'm glad you shared as much as you did! And now that you've brought up the fact that Will's mom was a Teague...holy crap he really IS Uncle Captain jack isn't he? Too funny.

If you aren't planning on continuing this story, could you answer one question for me? I'm a metalsmith so I was intensely curious about what Will is making for Elizabeth. What is it?

Thanks again for sharing this story!

Wowie wow wow!

This is a really awesome story!

Will you be updating soon?

It's been a long time since you added anything to this-and I want to know what happens next!

Can you add to the story?

THANKS!

I love this story so much. It's just so good and so well written. I've read through the whole thing twice now. But I wish there was more. I so want to find out what happens with Estrella's husband, and whether anybody ever finds out about Will and where he was, and if they believe it, and I want to see the Governor's ball, and so much more. Please, please write more. I entreat you most fervently. Please?

This is just such an amazing story, and you are such a brilliant writer! Hoping you can find time to finish this masterpiece- esp. for us your readers : )

I've read all three of your stories, and I can say that they are absolutley amazing! I love that you had Will come back after the ten years! And I am really hoping that you will update soon! It's been so long since you have, and I'm sure more than one person is hoping that you will. If you do, know that I will be looking forward to reading it!

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Hola Eliza! Falto su escritura. Sus historias son bien escritas y un placer leer. Continúe por favor escribiendo. ¡Usted es increíblemente talentoso! Espero que esto traduzca bien... )

I just finished rereading this, I love it! I hope that you will continue to have the time and desire to keep working on it and the others stories in this series.

Please update : )

Finally all caught up with your stories. I like how you wrote the loop hole so Will could come back home to his family. Looking forward to more.