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| tefla 2007-08-31 ch 8,  | abuseA great read so far. I like how you've fleshed out Natalie's POV of her past and her relationship with Ernie. I eagerly await the next chapter Chadini. Very mesmerizing. ^-^ |
| LOCISVU 2007-08-31 ch 8, | abuseI partly blame Natalie's biological father for what happened to her.Abandoning her is just plain wrong. |
| luv0817 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseI just found your story and- I'm IN! I can't wait to read more! |
| LOCISVU 2007-07-29 ch 7, | abuseI'm kind of getting so anxious as to what CSI is going to have on the season premier.Clearly Fox's character is in limbo. |
| LOCISVU 2007-07-17 ch 6, | abuseI'm liking this.The focus right now is on Natalie on how and why she killed and made the miniatures. |
| El Gringo Loco 2007-07-17 ch 6, | abuseAn interesting story told with great detail from the killers perspective. As portrayed she is one seriously sick cookie. But we already knew that from the series didn't we? Still the convoluted machinations of her deluded mind make for great reading. I hope to see more soon. |
| CR1-GSR 2007-06-19 ch 4, | abusekeep going,it is nice to see this taken from a different perspective |
| EvaristePoche 2007-06-16 ch 3, | abuseI think it is SO interesting! I really love the way you are doing it from Natalie's point of view and getting the mixture of childishness and compulsion. Ali x |
| MsGiggles 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseFor some reason, this looks and sounds to me more like a book report than creative writing. I can't fault the writing, but there isn't much interesting in the story that we haven't heard before. |
| litbuff 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseGood job on your first fic! Kudos to you for saying that blood smells like iron instead of copper. Great detail. Keep up the good work. |