interesting, didnt think of it that way, loved use of emotion

Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.

good story

It's alright, but it is a bit repetitve with Bastian's gulping. Needs a bit of re-write, but it's not too bad.

Wow, only one review? This oneshot was very interesting and well done. I did not catch any spelling mistakes (which is good) and the transitions between Atreyu's thoughts and those of Bastian were smooth and easy to read and understand. The italics helped. Very good job convaying the thoughts and emotions of these two characters. Well done. :-D

Very well done! It's never easy to capture the feelings of these two characters, as everything in the movie is so...magical! Great job nonetheless, you really kept me reading. Nice switch between the two, as it was a smooth reading.